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First of all, what does a crown have to do with "REPETE?" and what does a crown have to do with whatever REPETE does?
It's too weak, it has no visual weight. All of the elements need to feel comfortable together, like they belong together in the same spot. The weight of the lines needs to be heavier to give the logo some weight so that you can actually recognize it, and when you do that you need to also pay attention to how the body of the logo itself (the black) works with the negative space (the white background) so that the shapes created by the white are pleasing and complimentary to the logo too.
Stop bumping your thread, or people won't take it seriously / it will be deleted.