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Empire needs a proof reader

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KramerC
Posts: 619 - Karma: 21
Its no wonder they suck. This is from website. WTF is the second sentence.
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To be a company that is made by the ATHLETES for theATHLETES. From material, performance, design of our products. EMPIRE will bethe brand to provide what the ATHLETES and consumers want, not what theindustry suggests.

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Oct 11 2010 10:42PM
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KramerC
Posts: 619 - Karma: 21
http://www.empireattire.com/about_empire.html
Oct 11 2010 10:44PM
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KramerC
Posts: 619 - Karma: 21
http://www.empireattire.com/about_empire.html

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Oct 11 2010 10:45PM
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LIL-WAT
Posts: 1510 - Karma: 146
Let it die my friend, it is over.
Oct 11 2010 11:43PM
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finchski
Posts: 470 - Karma: 621
OMG someone forgot to press the spacebar!!! i need to make a thread about this!... actually!.... you dont
Oct 12 2010 12:12AM
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beermuscles
Posts: 1821 - Karma: 100
i mean .. it is unprofessional.
Oct 12 2010 12:20AM
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steezyjibber
Posts: 15967 - Karma: 11,026
such an unoriginal mission statement
Oct 12 2010 12:30AM
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hellyeaaaah
Posts: 640 - Karma: 8
sounds like someone is pretty bitter over something, plus, why the fuck are you scouring their website for grammatical errors anyways?
Oct 12 2010 12:34AM
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Keyjibbs
Posts: 1542 - Karma: 96
Empire is a shitty, unprofessional, unoriginal, and overpriced company anyway. I wouldn't expect anything better from them.
Oct 12 2010 12:34AM
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RubberSoul
Posts: 11249 - Karma: 14,642
apply for the job and use this thread as your resume
Oct 12 2010 1:01AM
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MatsoFatso
Posts: 71 - Karma: 18
Don't be mad... Just because Simon Dumont makes millions per year, and can start and operate his own brand company. They can write shit however they want in my opinion. I just wanna see good product developement.
Oct 12 2010 1:15AM
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schwinger
Posts: 147 - Karma: 10
Empire is a dope brand. Dope gear, designed by the riders themselves.

Even though i find it hard to believe i'm justifying your retarded thread with an explanation, maybe you should think about how the website is most likely also created by a friend of the fam and they may not take to much notice of grammatical errors.

P.S your a douche got start your own glove company bitch.
Oct 12 2010 2:15AM
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Mr.LemonPie
Posts: 4100 - Karma: 1,625
How are they a good brand? I had really high hopes when they started up, but they are so overpriced it's crazy. You can get a lot higher quality gloves for a lot less money.
Oct 12 2010 4:40AM
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steezyjibber
Posts: 15967 - Karma: 11,026
you're wrong.
Oct 12 2010 10:00AM
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Newschool_Pope
Posts: 2473 - Karma: 267
dont you know hes bankrupt and had to sell his house moved back to his parents and quit skiing?- cuz he cant double flip...








































true story
Oct 12 2010 10:15AM
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Kid_Eh
Posts: 91 - Karma: 8
Maybe you should have a proof reader as well.

"Its no wonder they suck" - missing an apostrophe
"This is from website"  - horrible grammar
"WTF is the second sentence" - missing a question mark

Educate yourself before you speak.


Oct 12 2010 11:29AM
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Rogge
Posts: 5773 - Karma: 3,930
Empire makes a good product. I just got their Empire mitten and they are diesel.
Oct 12 2010 11:33AM
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Mr.LemonPie
Posts: 4100 - Karma: 1,625
I haven't tried their mittens, I just used the park and pipe gloves from a year or two ago...ripped on the first day I had them, good park and pipe gloves won't ever rip.
Oct 12 2010 12:56PM
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414.
Posts: 3819 - Karma: 136
Why'd you have to make an alias? Pussy.

Check my grammar please.
Oct 12 2010 1:52PM
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EmperorKuzco
Posts: 6660 - Karma: 254
the Romans are awesome and i got them for 25$ new. Two of my friends have their pipe gloves and they love them
Oct 12 2010 2:00PM
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Kid_Eh
Posts: 91 - Karma: 8
First of all who's talking to you? Secondly I have no clue what you mean by "alias".

Oct 13 2010 10:38AM
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