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andrewmeehan
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This is my first time shooting Skateboarding, and it was only for about 2 hours.

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Sep 28 2010 9:50PM
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jfxphoto
Posts: 2038 - Karma: 2,346
Loved the last one!

Maybe, don't burn all the edges?
Sep 28 2010 10:18PM
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.jr
Posts: 5313 - Karma: 356
1 would of been good had it had 5's timing (though its slightly overexposed), vignettes way to much, colors aren't consistent between identical shots (ie. hes clothing on shots 3-4.)
Sep 28 2010 10:23PM
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michelle
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I really really like the first one. Definitely some things to change (its overexposed, maybe could've shot it a SECOND before you did, etc), but I love the vibe. It's different, the colors work well together.

To be honest the rest I don't really care for. They are typical skate shots. The vignettes are too much, like despite said, the colors are inconsistent. Exposures are off too.

I think if you put more time and thought into these, you can be good. Keep trying new things, taking risks with it (composition wise), and watch your histogram!!!
Sep 28 2010 10:30PM
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freshlyDIPPED
Posts: 1160 - Karma: 121
i im likin the first one. and the flip onto the rail.
good job.
oh and when the vig is pretty obvious, people tend to hate.
Sep 29 2010 12:17AM
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BryantPhoto
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Nice comp., but I'm not a fan of the color style
Sep 29 2010 1:27PM
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