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Critique this golf edit?

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VT_scratch
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filmed on a panasonic hmc150 720p 60fps / chopped in fcp7

Aug 28 2010 4:50PM
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VT_scratch
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Aug 28 2010 4:50PM
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family_vacation
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link us?
Aug 28 2010 4:50PM
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Sklar
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i liked it, fun vibe, flowed well
Aug 28 2010 4:54PM
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VT_scratch
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the first 'new flash vimeo' embed didnt work, then i posted it ha
Aug 28 2010 4:54PM
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MADDECENT
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Yeah I was surprised I was so interested by a golfing edit. Great choice of song, excellent filming, excellent editing. My only slight critique, and it's VERY slight, is that I didn't really like the blur on the edges of the credits at the end. Other than that, fantastic job.
Aug 28 2010 5:33PM
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horner
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I'd onvert your audio to and Aif or wav and re export the vid. The audio is popping, final cut doesn't work well with mp3s.
Aug 28 2010 5:34PM
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VT_scratch
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hm alright thanks for the tip
Aug 29 2010 7:23PM
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teleak
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I really, really liked that.
Aug 29 2010 10:19PM
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leahey
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:57 to 1:12 wow.

That was awesome
Aug 29 2010 10:26PM
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Official_Recap
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What scene file did you shoot with? If you didn't set one up, try fooling around with them and customizing the image a bit- you will be able to achieve a much different picture from the camera.

The editing flowed nicely. I liked the use of DOF, especially the tracking on the putt. Maybe take out the couple black fades and cross fade or add another shot or two- the video seemed to end and then restart at the black. As Alex mentioned, the audio needs to be fixed as well, but these are small details.

Great work and a nice change in pace with a different sport! Keep it up!
Aug 30 2010 12:25AM
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Ftacnik
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Nice edit. I liked it. Song?
Aug 30 2010 2:25AM
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A.Eberhard
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If you guys want this song here is the name.
"Home" by Edward Sharpe and the Magnetic Zeros


Dope golfing edit though he's pretty good at golfing to.
Aug 30 2010 8:36AM
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wynnyk
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I really liked it, good filming which kept me interested the whole time. Also were you using a glidecam?
Aug 30 2010 10:56AM
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Randy_Quench
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not gonna lie, i thought the title was comical. edit was awesome. filming was great, flowed nice.
Aug 30 2010 2:59PM
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.jr
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Damn looks like Im in the minority, many of the shots were underexposed and I thought the use of Edward Sharpe was terrible. That songs vibe is the exact opposite of lets go golf.
Aug 30 2010 3:36PM
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TravelsTI
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Girl's swing is money
Aug 30 2010 3:48PM
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family_vacation
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I thought that the whole think seemed a tad underexposed, although I liked the song choice.
Aug 30 2010 4:16PM
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midget.
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i want his putter
Aug 30 2010 6:08PM
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RAWLAN
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ha i thought that was gonna be a waste of my time but it was actually pretty cool, props man
Aug 30 2010 7:02PM
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dwigt
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white belt= no respect
Aug 31 2010 3:52AM
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