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Critique My Summer Skate Edit

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skiierrrrrrr
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Looking for some constructive criticism/comments on a skate edit I just put together. Thanks and enjoy!!

Aug 21 2010 1:24PM
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Yung_Gnarley
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ahh that was sick. everything was good
Aug 21 2010 1:49PM
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IanAvery-Leaf
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I'm lovin it, the opening smith was dope
Aug 21 2010 2:07PM
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ILoveOhio
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First I'd like to say. YOUR VX wazzz so xrispyyy brah!! waiii better then the t2i ughhhh ew HD.

Ok serious now.

Overall I liked the edit. Banger back smith!

I would take out the really quick shot at 49ish seconds. It didn't flow for me, but that's my opinion.

One other thing I would change is that there were too many crossfades towards the end. Find a more "creative" way to transition between shots instead of just fading.

I liked it though.
Aug 21 2010 9:07PM
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grilledsteezeyo
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uve pretty much got it down sick edit!
Aug 22 2010 2:19PM
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50in07
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Sick filming.
Aug 22 2010 11:50PM
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ike.
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a couple of your shots wre horridly over exposed but overall very sick
Aug 23 2010 1:42AM
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