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My First Song

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GORlLLA
Posts: 1950 - Karma: 45
Hello NS, I just finished recording my first song ever and I just wanted to know what you all think. My rap name is "Papeh Shredda" and I was just hoping you could take a listen and give me some suggestions, advice, and constructive criticism for my first ever song. Thanks, hope you like it!

Aug 11 2010 9:54PM
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I.Love.Beezy
Posts: 2117 - Karma: 784
you have a cool name. and no auto tune please
Aug 11 2010 9:57PM
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J-Evs
Posts: 6387 - Karma: 1,615
you have a long music career ahead of you.























NOT
Aug 11 2010 10:03PM
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Doug.
Posts: 2236 - Karma: 457
Not feeling the name and as said above no auto-tune. The actual song wasn't bad tho.
Aug 11 2010 10:26PM
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Benson23
Posts: 1713 - Karma: 15
to be honest, voice was super deep kinda weird al sound, the auto tune was kinda gay, the beat was 90's but the lyrics were pretty cool keep up the good work just change it up a little, in my opinion that is.
Aug 11 2010 10:30PM
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Balzberg
Posts: 538 - Karma: 470
lose the auto tone and itll be sick
Aug 11 2010 10:31PM
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