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New shirt design for NS. Feedback!

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MN_Nice
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It's a rough draft so give me some feedback.

Alright heres the front

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Aug 4 2010 2:32PM
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MN_Nice
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NO! This is the back!

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And it's called the GNARley Brown.
Aug 4 2010 2:33PM
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chardi
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took me a second but i got it. i think i like the name more than the shirt
Aug 4 2010 2:46PM
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wintersway
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this. dislike the basic spherical gradient.
(really hate how the center is obvious)
Aug 4 2010 3:02PM
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MN_Nice
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Just a rough draft bro. How about the basic idea of it? Good? Bad?
Aug 4 2010 3:44PM
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chardi
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i like the idea of it. i think the name is so good that it shouldn't be given up on. but i like the idea. i would like to see some other color schemes. to be honest i dont really like the black and rainbow but i like the idea. maybe throw in a little ignant woodstock chillin in the corner or something
Aug 4 2010 3:58PM
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t3hb055
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you should raise the gradiant higher, keep the name there. more separation though.
Aug 4 2010 4:28PM
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MN_Nice
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Redo! More Feedback.

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Aug 4 2010 4:32PM
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0ptions
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Man I'm pretty certain they can't just print snoopy on a shirt. Copyright.
Aug 4 2010 4:44PM
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MN_Nice
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Shit, didn't think of that.
Aug 4 2010 4:45PM
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MN_Nice
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What if I were to take off the Snoopy and Woodstock but kept the stripes the same? And have different color combos? Custom color combos?
Aug 4 2010 4:58PM
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MADDECENT
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I don't like the stripes, in my opinion you should just make the rainbow look better, but obviously a couple other people dont share my opinion
Aug 4 2010 5:38PM
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MN_Nice
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How about these guys?

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Aug 4 2010 6:05PM
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Balto
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you do understand copyrighted images right?
Aug 4 2010 7:00PM
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nickyp
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I don't like the whole band of colour thing around the middle. It makes the shirt look cheap.


I'd rather a legit design on the front, and the NS logo on the back at the bottom
Aug 4 2010 7:04PM
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MN_Nice
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This is the whole point of the shirt. The zig zag like Charlie Brown's shirt. If you don't like it then you don't like it.
Aug 4 2010 7:15PM
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nickyp
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Why does it have to look like Charlie Brown's shirt?

Why can't it be an original shirt?
Aug 4 2010 7:31PM
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MN_Nice
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Because my original idea was to take Charlie Brown's shirt and make it into a style Newschoolers would like. Thus comes the name, GNARlie Brown.
Aug 4 2010 7:34PM
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chardi
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as soon as i saw this i was so stoked. yes! yes! yes! but i forgot about copyright, sick though. i feel like the idea is missing something, i like this but obviously we can't do it.

i would be much more interested in buying this if it was a tall t, the design (imo) i think would be a lot cooler for a tall t than regular fit, my opinion but i would prefer that for this shirt. all the designs i have seen i would prefer a tall tee.

i feel like ns hasn't been too "gung ho" (sp) on adding items to their store (except for 5 shirts, i got 2, which is sick) so i don't think they would run with this idea too quickly. but if you were able to get people to order them on here and went through a screen printing company and get these printed on tall tees yourself you could bag some cash for sure.

anyway, i like the designs and would definitely be interested in buying one. you have really good designing skills (the illegal shirt was sooooo dope, if only there was a way to get around copyright laws) keep up the good work. talk to some moderators or printing businesses to see what you can have done. and as always, keep up the designing and keep em posted here. (if you other ideas also)

and to anyone who saw the thread, someone had an idea a while ago for an "iski" t shirt, like the old ipod ads with a silhouette of a skier. nothing ever came of it to my knowledge and if anyone wants to put some money into this (op are you listening?) there was a lot of offers in the initial thread and some good stuff can come of that.
Aug 4 2010 11:07PM
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MN_Nice
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One iSki Tee, coming up!
Aug 5 2010 12:09AM
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MN_Nice
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How's this? Now that i finished it, i'm contemplating to make the skier bigger and the font smaller.

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Aug 5 2010 12:36AM
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gigi.d
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I kinda like this... Good job.
Aug 5 2010 12:46AM
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.jr
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First off, it looks like shit, Second off your crossing into borderline copyright issues, Thirdly, that would be hard and expensive as fuck to print. Not going to happen.
Aug 5 2010 1:14AM
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Shredability
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Well arnt you a downer today
Aug 5 2010 1:36AM
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MN_Nice
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First off, I made these in less than 5 minutes, so fuck off.

Second, It's an idea, the guy said he wanted some peanuts characters in there, so I did it. So fuck off.

Thirdly, the graphic is not in proportion. I made these in less than 5 minutes. Besides, he said people have been asking for them for a while, so I'm guess they'ed sell like crazy if thats true. So fuck off and stop being so negative. It's harsh to cut down someone's ideas that much.
Aug 5 2010 2:10AM
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SweatyBallShack
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Try making it look hike charlie brown's shirt. Yellow and brown(?) But if you're still goin for the rainbow thing, go for something that shifts thru the whole color spectrum. Like a progressive change of color
Aug 5 2010 2:38AM
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MN_Nice
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Did you look at the later post of the redo's? I'm pretty sure it has that spectrum look to it.
Aug 5 2010 2:48AM
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SweatyBallShack
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fuck I didnt even see that. I used to have one that looked kinda like this as my desktop background.
http://wallpaperswide.com/thumbs/color_spectrum-t1.jpg
Aug 5 2010 2:51AM
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underflipped
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these are all pretty wack, and what makes you think ns will just fork over money to make these shirts?
Aug 5 2010 9:49AM
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chardi
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you have talant. i would make the font smaller though. i don't know how this crosses copyright ad's, i don't think there would be any trouble. but i really like it. you said you made it in 5 minutes (give or take i'm sure) so it could use a little changes. besides making the font smaller / maybe in the corner or something, it would be cool to make icons instead of ear buds, that said, dope. keep up the good work.
Aug 5 2010 5:24PM
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SweatyBallShack
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icons would be sick
Aug 5 2010 5:26PM
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chardi
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here is the orginal thread, which has died, but it can give some new ideas, although i like the current one the best. you may also notice my posts in this thread, especially the last one, i would love for this to get made.

https://www.newschoolers.com/web/forums/readthread/thread_id/530525/page/2/
Aug 5 2010 5:33PM
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Shredability
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In September I'm going to have access to my schools printing machine, like an actual t-shirt printing (forget whats its called) I'm going to get the permission of the guy who posted them then start banging them out, I'm also going to make some new designs and start up a site

And its not going to be like a white shirt with an orange box, full orange shirt with the skier in the middle

Oh yea! in tall as well
Aug 6 2010 4:04PM
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SweatyBallShack
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Is it a silkscreen?
Aug 6 2010 5:42PM
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Shredability
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Yep, because my teacher called it "silkscreening". But now that I remember I think I can only do one colour
Aug 6 2010 5:45PM
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i.ski.NC
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Its ok. Hey what about Steezy P?
Aug 6 2010 5:46PM
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MN_Nice
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What?
Aug 6 2010 5:48PM
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i.ski.NC
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I meant to aim that at LOLreganLOL. Its an inside joke
Aug 6 2010 5:49PM
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Shredability
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Yea I just got confused
Aug 6 2010 5:50PM
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SweatyBallShack
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Hahahahahahaha PLEASE upload one of your steezy P drawings. I've never seen one. That made my day. haha
Aug 6 2010 5:53PM
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Ducky.
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I like where you are going with this
Aug 6 2010 5:59PM
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i.ski.NC
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this is Steezy P.

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Aug 6 2010 6:17PM
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SweatyBallShack
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I wanna see one that you drew on paper tho. lol. thats funny as hell
Aug 6 2010 6:20PM
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i.ski.NC
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I made like 10 on paper. I lost em all though. The ones on paper were better.
Aug 6 2010 6:22PM
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SweatyBallShack
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draw one NAO!
Aug 6 2010 6:24PM
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Shredability
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Sure, if hill let me
Aug 6 2010 6:24PM
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Shredability
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Sure, if hill let me
Aug 6 2010 6:25PM
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SweatyBallShack
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wait... are those your initials? I thought landon was your first name
Aug 6 2010 6:27PM
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i.ski.NC
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maybe later
Aug 6 2010 6:30PM
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i.ski.NC
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and it is. i dont know what the p stands for. lol
Aug 6 2010 6:31PM
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SweatyBallShack
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Wow I seriosly thought your first name was like peter or something and I didnt know it. haha.
Aug 6 2010 6:32PM
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