Replying to Constructive critic of my ski edit

Here's my edit of the past ski season. I want constructive criticism to improve my editing and my skiing. I edited by myself. I ski at Mont-Sainte-Anne and Le Relais in Quebec city. There is some shot (when I wear black pants) from last year as this edit was my entry for the PG>13 contest.

I know there's almost no jumps in this edit. The RCR resort have no more jumps and I got no good shot the day I filmed at Le Relais.

I want to improve my jumps. I am tramping a lot this summer. I will also be at the D-splash.

Thanks

Tom