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Please critique my roller edit

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pello
Posts: 179 - Karma: 358
yestarday I did this edit to my friend Alex. He is learning new tricks now but I want to critique the edit for the next time.

<object width="400" height="300"><param name="allowfullscreen" value="true" /><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always" /><param name="movie" value="http://vimeo.com/moogaloop.swf?clip_id=12777906&server=vimeo.com&show_title=1&show_byline=1&show_portrait=0&color=&fullscreen=1" /><embed src="http://vimeo.com/moogaloop.swf?clip_id=12777906&server=vimeo.com&show_title=1&show_byline=1&show_portrait=0&color=&fullscreen=1" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowfullscreen="true" allowscriptaccess="always" width="400" height="300"></embed></object><p><a href="http://vimeo.com/12777906">Alex Eibar park</a> from <a href="http://vimeo.com/user935635">pello</a> on <a href="http://vimeo.com">Vimeo</a>.</p>

thanks!!
Jun 23 2010 2:05PM
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pello
Posts: 179 - Karma: 358
OOOPSSS works now?
Jun 23 2010 2:06PM
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family_vacation
Posts: 6200 - Karma: 7,840
I hope the next edit shows some thought/taste in the song selection department.

Also, you're not shooting 60p, so the slo mo looks pretty bad because of the frame rate. Good job though, you should just go out and keep filming though, thats how you improve.
Jun 23 2010 2:12PM
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