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Preview of a sketch I am doing

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MatRich
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hey guys I want to know what you think about this little sketch Im working on right now. input would be good and just some reactions and thoughts.


oh and I know that theres one shot thats out of focus, im probably re shooting. its hard to set the focus on yourself when your not actualy there
Jun 9 2010 3:22PM
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IanAvery-Leaf
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i really liked it, and I didnt even mind the out of focus shot
the shot where you show both of you the door is 2 tones from the masking kinda distracted me with the different colors, but not that big of a deal
Jun 9 2010 5:07PM
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MatRich
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shit realy? il check that out.. its perfect time to tell me that since Its rough cut, I didnt color correct yet so that could help
Jun 9 2010 5:09PM
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MANDER
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really funny. moar!
Jun 11 2010 8:41PM
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.jr
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What? I saw nothing wrong with his masking.. its different tones because the one standing is lit, whereas the other one is. Doesnt bother me at all.

Camera gets real jumpy from 13-16sec, that kinda annoys me. Also, wtf does he say at the end, I played it 5 times and cant understand him.
Jun 11 2010 10:24PM
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MatRich
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what do you mean by jumpy? the fact that theres cuts?

I say about your camera I noticed something wierd. its normal that you didnt understand since for now its completely out of context
Jun 11 2010 10:28PM
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.jr
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haha what?

jumpy because for the first like 12 seconds there are no cuts, then you play less than a second of one shot, then cut, then less than a second, then cut. and do this 4-5 times.
Jun 11 2010 10:36PM
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IanAvery-Leaf
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he did a perfect job masking Im just saying if he adjusted the colors of one the door would blend better, but I think Im in the 0.01% of people who are going to notice, so its not that big of a deal
Jun 11 2010 10:40PM
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MatRich
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just wondering, the matt line your talking about, is it the one going down vertically right in front of the back of my head down towards the shoulders? because that is a shadow, my matt is actualy diagonal. is this what your seeing or the shadow, because if its my matt, I have a problem ......0.01% is a huge problem for me. Im a perfectionist.
Jun 11 2010 10:46PM
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.jr
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lol claiming what he doesnt know anything about. There is no color change between the masking.
Jun 11 2010 10:48PM
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J-Neal
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Jun 12 2010 7:05PM
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MatRich
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I have more funny sketches on the way... I have to finish this one and I have two more in pre production.

the only issue is that I dont have an external harddrive so managing the hd is impossible at this point and so editing is also impossible. once I get the equipment I plan on posting a funny sketch at least once a month and Idealy once a week
Jun 12 2010 11:33PM
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