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Shitty longboard edit

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l337.
Posts: 97 - Karma: 11
hello everyone i recently put together a little edit of a couple hours of longboarding and am looking for some feedback
-i know my editing isn't that good, critiquing that would be nice
-my intro and ending are kind of weak. thoughts on how i could have made them better?

please watch here in hd:
http://www.vimeo.com/12220047

josh, joe, and i on 5/30/2010




thanks and be nice this is media and arts
Jun 3 2010 3:14PM
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garrets
Posts: 1447 - Karma: 60
Don't be so hard on yourself calling it shitty, it was good! I liked the intro and for the end just maybe something small to wrap it up more like your friends walking away or something simple like that.
Jun 3 2010 7:06PM
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i love you mitch.
Jun 3 2010 7:27PM
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fuck.your.tits
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definitely not shitty man. It was short but nice
Jun 3 2010 7:27PM
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l337.
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thanks, and yeah maybe ill try that next time. and thanks joey love you too :*
Jun 4 2010 10:19PM
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DDrem.
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it wasnt that bad of an edit, figured id give you that
on a side note, what brown shoes was the kid wearing riding the pintail or whatever with yellow orangutangs
Jun 5 2010 7:24PM
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apcaipse
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I liked it, one thing that I thought might have just been bad editing, was at the beginning when the camera was showing the guy rolling past, it was on the side of the road and it was a really nice shot, then you moved it and it ruined the moment for me. But overall I liked it.
Jun 5 2010 9:20PM
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NickSki.
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Watch out for head cutting
Jun 5 2010 9:52PM
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*steeze_is_good
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Not bad man, don't be so hard on yourself! What kind of longboard does purple shirt have? The guy with the brown shoes
Jun 5 2010 9:58PM
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JESSE.
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loaded pintail? could be completely wrong but just a guess.
Jun 5 2010 10:48PM
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Kirsakid
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Not shitty at all but how long is that huge longboard
Jun 6 2010 2:39AM
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l337.
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56'' i believe, its the loaded dancer its a super fun board
Jun 6 2010 9:52AM
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Bukkakeskitrip
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yeah dude that wasnt shitty at all, i enjoyed it. and the intro was sweet, but yeah like someone said, maybe wrap it up better, instead of just cutting it off. and the cunninlynguists song was dope, good choice
Jun 6 2010 10:28AM
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l337.
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oh shit yeah thats my loaded pintail its my baby gets it done with anything i ask it to
Jun 7 2010 2:33PM
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l337.
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im not really sure what they are, nike dunks? maybe not sure i just bought them off a friend
Jun 7 2010 2:35PM
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rj.
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p.o.s.
Jun 7 2010 2:53PM
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l337.
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tehehehehe
Jun 7 2010 9:00PM
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jeremy.g
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that was pretty nice. if anything some of the shots, intro especially were a bit shaky, but thats about it. use a tripod or glidecam
Jun 7 2010 10:37PM
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Wood_Wizard
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that was sick only if you want to do tricks and stuff maybe try a skateboard no hate
Jun 7 2010 11:53PM
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l337.
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naw we carve lots, and bomb the fuck out of big hills but its just a dancing edit. haha skateboarding=super hard at least ill admit i can't do it
Jun 8 2010 7:08PM
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