Replying to WTB critique please.

first ever "film" (more of an edit in my eyes) i ever created, and i just wanted to know NS opinion on what i need to work on, what i could have done better or what you liiked about it. I made it in a super crunch of time so i know i could have done better but tell me what you guys think. 

BeauTiFul from Loren Creer on Vimeo.

also the quality is meh due to my camera being the canon GL2. upgrading to a 7D in june so pretty stoked.