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WTB critique please.

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LjayCinema
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first ever "film" (more of an edit in my eyes) i ever created, and i just wanted to know NS opinion on what i need to work on, what i could have done better or what you liiked about it. I made it in a super crunch of time so i know i could have done better but tell me what you guys think. 

BeauTiFul from Loren Creer on Vimeo.



also the quality is meh due to my camera being the canon GL2. upgrading to a 7D in june so pretty stoked.
May 27 2010 8:44PM
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1337
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gotta pay me $5 first
May 27 2010 9:22PM
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Jennings
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solid skiing.
May 27 2010 9:28PM
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Tanner-D
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This was truly one of the sicker edits ive seen in a while good job brah
May 29 2010 10:18AM
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LjayCinema
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buuump
May 30 2010 4:37PM
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miroz
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Good vibe, good skiing, great song.

One thing I didn't like though was that it jumped around a bit. I felt that you included shots of snow/snow falling that led into park shots, and then there was no transition into powder. I felt like you could have grouped everything together a little better, and that would've made it easier to watch and absorb.

Just my two cents yo.
May 30 2010 5:35PM
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A.Eberhard
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It was pretty good I wouldn't change anything you did about it. The skiing was really good and you had a good variety of angles and shots which made it flow nicely. 10/10 and enjoy your new 7d.
May 30 2010 5:38PM
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LjayCinema
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yeah, my intro was not concrete at all. and overall formatting.
May 30 2010 11:17PM
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LjayCinema
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bummmp
Jun 19 2010 3:58PM
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Deezy
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ur free hand stuff looked a bit off at the beginning but only got way better after 30 seconds. the slo mo clips are amazing, skiing is solid. this is a great edit.
Jun 19 2010 4:57PM
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