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Critique my edit please!

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pello
Posts: 179 - Karma: 358
I want to do better edits so pleas I want your advice!!

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May 3 2010 11:36AM
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pello
Posts: 179 - Karma: 358
opsssss sorry it´s here:

http://www.vimeo.com/11023786
May 3 2010 11:36AM
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iannelson
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Pello Osoro ATS Videorookie 2010 from pello on Vimeo.

May 3 2010 12:05PM
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..jack
Posts: 424 - Karma: 897
maybe use the cross zoom on some clips, might make them seem more interesting with movement. Aside from that its a nice edit, real nice sw 9

I've just finished a season in Avoriaz and live in montriond, send me a pm if your about again and we'll go for a shred!
May 3 2010 1:13PM
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RickAstley
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To be honest I don't know too much about editing, so I can't really help you with that. But in terms of skiing, it seems like you got tons of tech stuff down, nice work. I would just say try to tidy it up a bit, stop are arms flailing around and stomp those landings. Other than that, sick edit!
May 3 2010 1:25PM
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MCNUGGETS
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the hat flip @ 0:19 is MONEY!!!
May 3 2010 6:38PM
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niebski
Posts: 210 - Karma: 391

i might be wrong, but are your skis centermounted?

May 3 2010 6:52PM
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6God
Posts: 280 - Karma: 17
i agree, that was soo sick
I liked the edit, overall it was pretty good
May 3 2010 8:53PM
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A.Eberhard
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Change up your jumps shots they were mostly just standing on the knuckle shots try to stand further back and use your surroundings.
May 3 2010 9:06PM
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ISellMeth
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I can dig it
May 3 2010 11:25PM
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pello
Posts: 179 - Karma: 358
thanks!
May 4 2010 3:43PM
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.Max.
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That was sick, only thing i can think of is to film on some bluebird days, I know their hard to find.
May 4 2010 8:03PM
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