Replying to Magic Bullets Looks+ Edit critique

Hi guys, i'm not the most arsty person but i'd like to make a good season edit, about 3 mins long.

I've been doing this over the last few days.

If anyone could give me a pointers it would be great also whether its worth using a filter program like the magic bullets plug in

thanks in advance

here the edit

If there's any clips with should be taken out please say. Again any tip would be great.