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EthanJPAskier
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Rollerblading edit i did a few weeks ago, i sort of wanted to give it a summery vibe, I suck at blading, and i in no way think i'm good, just saying. Comments and Critiques welcome! and +K for replies.
Apr 15 2010 9:14PM
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EthanJPAskier
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Wow, that was real smoooth.


Apr 15 2010 9:17PM
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Meases_Pieces
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i really liked the feel. some smoother camera work on the halfpipe section and i really liked the close up shots so its always better to be close. so moving shots would be very visually interesting aswell.
Apr 15 2010 9:59PM
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mBall
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Yeah like the other guy said, i think you should try and get some moving shots and please take out the black border or whatever. anyway, its good, i think you shouldnt do quite so much slow mo because it makes it drag out long.
Just my opinion, good job
Apr 15 2010 11:35PM
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Charles.
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yeah pretty much try using a tripod for some shots and get some moving shots too. mabes some close up shots etc
Apr 16 2010 12:16AM
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.jr
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THIS IS NOT A STATEMENT AGAINST THE OP, THIS IS A STATEMENT TO ALL OF THE FUTURER EDITORS ON NS.


MORE VIGNETTE ≠ MORE ARTSY.

I honestly couldnt watch more than the first 5 seconds of it beause of the nasty vignette.
Apr 16 2010 12:34AM
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EthanJPAskier
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Thanks for the input guys, i'll def bring a tripod next time i go out, and i know what you mean about the vignette not being artsy, that wasn't what i was going for, i just felt like it added to the vibe on this edit.
Apr 16 2010 4:52PM
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Brock.
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this needs to be displayed every time someone tries to upload a video
Apr 16 2010 7:58PM
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J-Evs
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good edit.
definately use a tripod for some different shots...

also what kind of camera u using?
Apr 16 2010 8:12PM
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Blandct
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lose the vig.
Apr 16 2010 9:30PM
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EthanJPAskier
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Thanks dude, and the camera's a Canon HF100
Apr 17 2010 10:07AM
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BigJew
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This.

Also, what's the song?
Apr 17 2010 6:54PM
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jason...
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The vignette was absolutely useless and did nothing to make your shots look better. Please don't use it next time. And if you do, don't make is so damn thick.
Apr 17 2010 7:09PM
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*Fujative*
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I agree and disagree. 99% of vignettes do not work and make "your" video much worse.
Apr 17 2010 9:12PM
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EthanJPAskier
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Right Now - Ugly Duckling
Apr 17 2010 10:07PM
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.frenchy
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pretty sick, good song too.
Apr 17 2010 10:14PM
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EthanJPAskier
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gracias
Apr 22 2010 5:54PM
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