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Critique my Editing

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50in07
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My computer wont let me embed tight now. But heres the link.


Apr 14 2010 6:16PM
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Sklar
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Will Erickson '09-'10 from Will Erickson. on Vimeo.

Apr 14 2010 6:42PM
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Six.0.Tree-ski
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dope colors in the edit. i liked it. what cam you usin?
Apr 14 2010 6:47PM
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50in07
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GoPro HD.
Apr 14 2010 6:51PM
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Six.0.Tree-ski
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Wow sick man. I think those colors made the edit.
Apr 14 2010 7:03PM
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cultrara
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very nice. i thought the black was slightly too long in the beggining. everything else was sick. good job man.

Apr 14 2010 7:29PM
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Sklar
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some of the colors seemed a little over doctored imo, but i still liked it
Apr 14 2010 7:59PM
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50in07
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Which ones specifically?
Apr 14 2010 11:28PM
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Sklar
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:25ish 1:00ish, and some of the beginning seems just a little too saturated which makes it a look kind of un-natural
Apr 14 2010 11:47PM
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Davy.Crockett
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the color was awesome, especially the evening shots at the beginning.
Apr 15 2010 7:42PM
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benalt
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dope man those colors were crisp
Apr 15 2010 9:43PM
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holyDINOSAURS
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sorry dude, serious over colour correction. take it down a notch or two
Apr 16 2010 2:50PM
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skiP.E.I.
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Good job,
I don't mind the super saturated colours so much, I think the music fit well with the slow-mo, It would be nice to see some shots other than jumps and rails, but I know that's sometimes hard to do when all you have is a terrain park
Apr 16 2010 3:41PM
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Blandct
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you could make the transition on the beat with a strong beat like that.
Apr 16 2010 5:30PM
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BakersDozen
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i like the vibe to it with the music and colors. nice work man
Apr 16 2010 9:57PM
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Static
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i loved the random black spots, did a great job at breaking up the flow

sick font choice too

in all serious though, what part of the editing were we supposed to critique? You laid all the clips in the timeline and exported them, nothing stood out as being cut with purpose except the fades, and they we're fine I suppose.

Apr 16 2010 10:59PM
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