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What do you guys think of my first edit?

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DJ_Pauly_D
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Hey, this the first time i edited a video, its my little brother skiing, he's 12 years old.. ++++K for constructive critisism...

need help with the embed

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PU4pB15rBKM

Mar 30 2010 7:20PM
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Sklar
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Mar 30 2010 7:24PM
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Sklar
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i liked that one better than the edit
Mar 30 2010 7:24PM
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gordie.
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i liked it. you're on your way
Mar 30 2010 7:24PM
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Gooseling
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its not bad... the camera is pretty shaky sometimes and there are many effects(not necesarrily bad).

Your skiing was pretty good, but I just noticed on your switchups your body wasnt really getting around

good job for a first edit though
Mar 30 2010 7:26PM
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Sklar
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time for real crit
You gotta work on steadying out that camera. A tripod will do wonders, and make it look so much cleaner.
You could also work on cutting your clips a little better, we don't need to watch the skier start and ski all the way up to the feature, try cutting some a little earlier,
but its not a bad first edit
Mar 30 2010 7:32PM
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Gooseling
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I liked your tocuhdown. How old were you then?
Mar 30 2010 7:53PM
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DJ_Pauly_D
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Thats my brother skiing and him playing football and he was about 9 at that time..

Mar 30 2010 7:58PM
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A.Eberhard
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I have that checkered hat!
Mar 30 2010 9:32PM
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teleTay
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first edit.. i guess its ok?

but honestly i did not see much editing

it was pretty much a bunch of clips with a song overthem


they will get better when you edit more...just do it alot
Mar 30 2010 10:36PM
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