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First Sequences Critique Please

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skithe49th
Posts: 2487 - Karma: 14
Hey I shot these up at Key a while back, lemme now what you think. Click to make them bigger.

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king.of.gnarnia
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in the first few picts having a few more shots before the take off would have have made it legit. but nice work tho
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*Nickdel*
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those are looking real good man. keep it up. maybe try to get a little closer if possible.
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icantskiiFILM
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u fucked up the second to last
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skithe49th
Posts: 2487 - Karma: 14
haha yeaa. i know but shit happens. i tried fixing it but it just ended up looking worse than it is now
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iannelson
Posts: 321 - Karma: 43

Thoes look way sick. My favorite is the third one up from the bottom.

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petesguitar1
Posts: 358 - Karma: 5
They look good dude.
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^nate^
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the skies are kinda of "glowing" which leads me to think you are trying to cut them out of each sequential photo and then lay them over an original background.

i might be wrong tho, if that's how you're doing it though you should really try layer masking instead.

lookin good tho.
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skithe49th
Posts: 2487 - Karma: 14
yeaa thats what i did just cause i shot them without a tripod and there were minor shakes just from not being able to hold my arm steady for the whole time. I tried layering them but it just turned out shitty. Another reason I didn't do it this way was the shots looking down the lip of the jump the skiers overlapped alot in layering so i had to fix that too. Next time I plan on using a tripod though.
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c-kennz
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Most of them look really good so far. The 4th and 5th ones are from a really bad angle- it's hard for the eye to separate the different phases of the trick. The second to last sequence (the one on the rail) is a good angle for most of it, but you'll probably miss any trick off the end of it unless you zoomed it in.
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