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Constructive Criticism wanted

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Shreddysaurus
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I didnt film this just edited it for a friend. the quality is shitty but that was out of my hands.
just tell me what you think.


Feb 24 2010 3:24AM
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Shreddysaurus
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ignore the little ad at the end
Feb 24 2010 3:31AM
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Shreddysaurus
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bump
Feb 24 2010 12:14PM
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.frenchy
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nice job in the begining putting that fall in, because you dont just want people who land all their tricks, good song too. good edit bro!
Feb 24 2010 12:38PM
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T-Holt
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Too much slo mo. Vary it up. Also, change speeds in the same shot to get variety. I like the song, but I feel it's used a lot, no hate thogh, I love J5. Overall pretty good, but there's room for improvement.
Feb 24 2010 4:19PM
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Shreddysaurus
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i see what you mean with the change of speed. it would give it sort of dramatic effect
Feb 24 2010 11:33PM
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Shreddysaurus
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Feb 25 2010 1:41PM
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captainEMERICA
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i agree far too much slowmo
Feb 25 2010 5:39PM
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