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Official?: Critique My Edit Thread

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ski-swagga
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Hey, NS. ive seen alot of edits being posted up for critique on this forum and since it somewhat clutters the forum. It'd be nice to have all the information in one place, instead of scattered throughout the hisory of this forum. Hope this helps :)
Feb 18 2010 10:19PM
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Six.0.Tree-ski
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Whaleback Mtn. from Jake Burns on Vimeo.



go for it guys. not close to my best edit in my eyes but whatever.
Feb 18 2010 10:25PM
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ski-swagga
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i loved the way you introduced the first skier, why not do that for all of the skiers?
Feb 18 2010 10:49PM
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Brock.
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pretty good idea i guess. could end up being a pretty sweet learning tool.

Hot laps at RLC from brock grossman on Vimeo.Mike Chmil and Nic dube having a real super half hour on the shotgun rail. edited by Brock.g



i know its snowboarding but this thread is about editing, not footage so haters GTFO.
ps. i know the key framing is fucked. had some issues with the aspect ratio so it screwed up when i was exporting..
Feb 18 2010 11:20PM
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Brock.
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Hot laps at RLC from Brock Grossman on Vimeo.

Mike Chmil and Nic dube having a real super half hour on the shotgun rail.

edited by Brock.g


Feb 18 2010 11:21PM
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Six.0.Tree-ski
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dunno, i just didnt think it was that cool looking in my own eyes cause it was so easy.
Feb 18 2010 11:51PM
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AnthonyMoceri
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Feb 19 2010 12:00AM
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ski-swagga
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<object width="400" height="300"><param name="allowfullscreen" value="true" /><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always" /><param name="movie" value="http://vimeo.com/moogaloop.swf?clip_id=9484753&server=vimeo.com&show_title=1&show_byline=1&show_portrait=0&color=&fullscreen=1" /><embed src="http://vimeo.com/moogaloop.swf?clip_id=9484753&server=vimeo.com&show_title=1&show_byline=1&show_portrait=0&color=&fullscreen=1" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowfullscreen="true" allowscriptaccess="always" width="400" height="300"></embed></object><p><a href="http://vimeo.com/9484753">Heartbreaker Edit</a> from <a href="http://vimeo.com/user3185205">Haakon Lean</a> on <a href="http://vimeo.com">Vimeo</a>.</p>

Filmed in 3 hours.

Mt. Ashwabay Wisconsin
Feb 19 2010 12:15AM
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ski-swagga
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please work.
Feb 19 2010 12:15AM
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dwhite
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good, but don't use songs that have been in other edits...especially from clownschool.
Feb 19 2010 4:54PM
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EthanJPAskier
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BCB January Edit from Ethan Jeremias on Vimeo.


Feb 19 2010 4:56PM
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ski-swagga
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i cant critique much because i kinda suck at editing but i wanna say i loved the intro. and the "cuts" where the boarder disappears and reappears.
Feb 20 2010 9:36PM
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ReedSkis~
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Short Edit I made using a flip mino HD... didn't have my HMC-40 handy at the time

The Flip Edit (Feb 09/10) from Reed Rosenbluth on Vimeo.



not nearly my best work, but i was pleased with the footage...
Feb 21 2010 3:25PM
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TomasAa
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January&February |switchfilms.no from Tomas Aamli on Vimeo.


Feb 21 2010 3:31PM
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ReedSkis~
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Another one for you guys:

In the Morning - Beaver Creek 09/10 from Reed Rosenbluth on Vimeo.



Good idea for a thread btw!
Feb 21 2010 3:51PM
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Algebra
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1 Day from Will McIntyre on Vimeo.

Feb 22 2010 4:44PM
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BMskier
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i think that is terrible advice, but i do agree to some extent. there are songs that are way over used such as "let the drmmer kick" and a lot of biggie songs, but i have yet to hear this song in a lot of edits and i dont even rmemeber it being used in a clownschool edit. do you expect someone to go through the top rated on NS or the rest of the videos so they can make sure they are not useing the same song?
Feb 22 2010 4:52PM
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Contender
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very sick, looks like you guys had a ton of fun filiming that
Feb 22 2010 5:01PM
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Six.0.Tree-ski
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^^young'ens
Feb 22 2010 5:28PM
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thelizards
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what is the song in the first edit?
Feb 22 2010 5:48PM
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Six.0.Tree-ski
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5LzIS360q-M
Feb 22 2010 6:05PM
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A.Eberhard
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Really liked this one. Here is one of mine, the blurry filming would be my fellow skiers not me ,but the editing is me. I would be the one in the red/white.

Feb 22 2010 6:15PM
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ski-swagga
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haha i cant get over the song :) makes me lol everytime i watch this edit.
Feb 23 2010 10:45PM
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Barron
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A Few Laps at The Nut from Tom Barron on Vimeo.


Feb 23 2010 11:19PM
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Six.0.Tree-ski
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^definetly not a fan of the song. at all.
Feb 23 2010 11:28PM
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ski-swagga
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Girl Talk??
Feb 23 2010 11:38PM
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A.Eberhard
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Yeah kinda a weird song, but I liked the edit.
Feb 24 2010 3:49PM
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ski-swagga
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bump because there are a couple critique my edit threads popping up now.
Mar 1 2010 6:32PM
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A.Eberhard
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Bump for a thread that would could have a lot of sick edit in it!
Mar 2 2010 3:31PM
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JStrathern
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Kickin' it at Carinthia from Joe Strathern on Vimeo.



any feedback? (besides the fact that some shots were shaky, i didn't bring my tripod that day)

Mar 2 2010 4:08PM
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A.Eberhard
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Enjoyed intro, kinda of a weird  song choice, but it worked. The follow shots + slow mo didn't work out to well because the filming was shaky. Maybe try to get more creative and work with your surrounding to get some more creative shots. 6/10
Mar 4 2010 4:29PM
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ski-swagga
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Mini Rail Edit from Haakon Lean on Vimeo.

Mar 10 2010 4:54PM
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Six.0.Tree-ski
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Mar 10 2010 5:22PM
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ski-swagga
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^the edit was good! i lvoed the song and whatever you did when you put a shot on that wallride was dope. but i must say try to not put the same trick on the same feature more than once in a edit. it kinda got repetitive.
Mar 10 2010 5:45PM
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Six.0.Tree-ski
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yep and i thought it was too long when i finished too. the skier in it wanted to see all the shots though so i just threw them all in.
Mar 10 2010 5:58PM
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A.Eberhard
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The Mini Rail edit wasn't really an edit more just a bunch of clips with music no offense or anything.

The Sunapee edit was good ,but as said above to long for the amount of trick it had in it so maybe cut it down even if he wants lots of shots just put the best ones. Example the fs 270 out of the down flat rail just pick the cleanest and best angle. This makes it shorter and the skier is stoked because he thinks all of his 270 outs are that clean lol.
Mar 10 2010 6:45PM
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miroz
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I know this is a critique of the thread, not the videos, but I think (and have noticed) that this thread will be and has been basically just a video post fest, with more people posting videos than critiquing edits.

Unfortunately, I don't think this format will enable people to get in depth, focused critiques for their edits - critiques where people name shots and times about things they liked and didn't liked and overall detailed opinions on what the videographer could do better.  Thats where the individual threads come in - it allows for one-on-one with the edit.

A better solution might be to make it a rule that you have to critique the edit above you before you can post one of your own.  That way no one gets left out and everyone has to provide input.  I can attest to the fact that actually writing down what you like and don't like in an edit makes those opinions and visions that much more tangible in your mind, therefore improving your filmmaking.

Just my two cents, and I know I'm a part of the problem by not critiquing anything.  Sorry, my bad, but I don't have time to look into all of them and provide good viable detail.  Keep up the good work!

Cheers.

Mar 10 2010 7:21PM
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A.Eberhard
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True, most videos posted nobody is actually critique the editing filming just posting there own. I think that is great idea, you have to critique before you post your own.
Mar 10 2010 9:36PM
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MAC.D
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turn off your image stabilization or wipe the water off of your lens in the opening shots.
Mar 11 2010 6:49AM
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yaaaie
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Mar 11 2010 11:25AM
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ski-swagga
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i loved the editing! song was good. i thought the intro took a little too long but it was a pretty long edit so i guess thats ok. im not a very good editer and/or filmer so i cant say much else. good edit. :)

Apr 4 2010 3:30PM
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A.Eberhard
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^^^^^^^^ Don't take it as hate, but I didn't really like it, but I will help you improve this edit. Cut it short 3:00 for a season edit I find is to much, I personally like 2:00-2:30 of just there best no filler. The intro was long and pretty bland change the shot up and use of some more creative titles or create your own in photoshop if you can. If your going to do a shot of someone walking up the hill at least use a tripod because the shakes can be rather distracting. The song I didn't like other people will , but I didn't, found it didn't match the rider's style at all. I'm going to give you 3/10 maybe go back and re-edit this guys year end video and see what you come up with.
Apr 4 2010 9:32PM
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sklermang
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liked it, less ride in though would be nice
Apr 4 2010 9:47PM
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