Another critique my edit thread!

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Backyard Edit 2.0 from Joe Strathern on Vimeo.

some clips from daves backyard.

sick edit, only thin that could be changed is the tricks but you are very limited due to its just a backyard set up. What im tryng to say is sic backyard set up and edit, i wish i had snow and not 50 degrees c wether

ignore my comment about the tricks, i was pretty wasted last night and to be honest i couldn't really concentrate on it.

Sick edit and filming but it the tricks were pretty repetetive so it made the edit a bit boring

learned when I first started editing and making edits that shorter is better...if you can only keep banger shots instead of half decent then you'll keep the viewers interested, also with your edit if you have the same tricks but multiple angles then you can cut them together to make it a bit longer and create better composition if done right and not over done. just watch many other edits and you'll pick up a lot. hope this helps