Some of my photography

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Hoprfully this thread works im not very good at making them, but yea heres a few pics i just put together with photoshop i have many more... tell me what you think

Jan 23 2010 11:14AM

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ill put up some more later.... i used CS4 btw

Jan 23 2010 11:15AM

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Alkyy

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third clip of first sequence looks like he's holding a lightsaber. the framing on the second one is deffanatly the best imo, the last one he kinda disapears into the trees, try to keep an un cluttered background if possible to really make the subject pop (im comming from a video background so it might be a little different for photo)

Jan 23 2010 12:42PM

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1080ski

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most of the shot is too dark. adjust the levels in photoshop. auto levels works pretty well if your aim is to get the exposure correct in post.

Jan 23 2010 12:48PM

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thisandthatfilms

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theyre all blown out ad look really point and shoot. try to get better colors and angles

Jan 23 2010 2:18PM

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LBJJ

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he is holding a lightsaber........

but i second this

Jan 23 2010 7:04PM

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jason...

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This.

Jan 23 2010 10:11PM

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no_steeze

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having the trees in half of the frame makes the skier hard to see and throws off the balances

try to get just sky or a distant treeline

Jan 24 2010 1:18AM

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i agree with all the other posts. the sequences look pretty good and flawless but the colors and lighting of the photos could use work.

Jan 24 2010 2:52AM

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Thanks for the feedback ill try to work on that

Jan 24 2010 12:30PM

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Heres some of my non skiing photography...

Jan 25 2010 4:45PM

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Deezy

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You have to differ the subject from the background. you should get the skier on a blue sky or white snow... a dark jacket on trees will not get you anything good.

Jan 25 2010 5:43PM

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Backyard.Skier

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cool photos

Jan 25 2010 11:31PM

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Ham.and.Cheese

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The second set of photos were super good, just yeah as everyone was saying try to mix up the colors it's just sort of plain (the first set you showed)

Jan 26 2010 6:38PM

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The skiing pictures,
basically what everyone said. Especially the guy who told you to learn how to work a camera better before photoshop because he is right. And for your non skiing pictues i really only like the second and fourth one, the first and third one, the subjects blend wayyyyyyyy into the background so when i look at it i don;t know where to look untill i kinda bring out the objects. Hope this helps for next time

Jan 26 2010 7:58PM

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heres sme more of my favorites...