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Critique My First Edit Please

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onearmwanderer
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Just as the title says this is the first edit I ever made, filmed with a go pro helmet cam and edited with sony vegas 7.  Just looking for a little constructive criticism, tried playing around with a couple effects here and there and was wondering what worked best.  Wish I didn't have to use crash footage but I wanted to try and edit something and this was all I had.  Enjoy...

<object width="425" height="344"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/cxWQ-BSN8_c&hl=en_US&fs=1&color1=0x3a3a3a&color2=0x999999"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param><embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/cxWQ-BSN8_c&hl=en_US&fs=1&color1=0x3a3a3a&color2=0x999999" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowscriptaccess="always" allowfullscreen="true" width="425" height="344"></embed></object>
Jan 21 2010 9:04PM
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onearmwanderer
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hmmmm, never really tried to embed something before.  just copied and pasted the code, what did i do wrong? 

heres a link:    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cxWQ-BSN8_c
Jan 21 2010 9:06PM
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Six.0.Tree-ski
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Jan 21 2010 10:17PM
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A.Eberhard
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To embed when you reply their is this little button on the top with an "f" on it just click that a window will open that will tell you to paste the code. Do it then click add video and it will be their.
Overall: it wasn't much of an edit... just like clips put together the the beggining though I would have just put bigger white letter and don't put any of those like beam in texts and stuff like that just straight up change to each one.
Jan 21 2010 10:21PM
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onearmwanderer
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ha ya i agree with the beam stuff, i was just screwing around with some effects and forgot to change it later.  how do you think i should improve on the other part though?  tried to put the clips together with the music but does is the problem that it doesn't flow that well?
Jan 21 2010 11:15PM
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cobra_commander
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it flows just fine.

I liked it, made me want to go ski.
Jan 22 2010 12:56AM
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