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screamin_seamen
Posts: 619 - Karma: 551
Shot this in a day with a huge crew up at mt hood meadows.

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Jan 21 2010 10:39AM
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screamin_seamen
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=baWqfpxVcl0

sorry about that
Jan 21 2010 10:42AM
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speightphoto
Posts: 182 - Karma: 64
don't really like the song that much..
and i feel like it needs at least a little color somewhere.
Jan 21 2010 5:43PM
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ReedSkis~
Posts: 2122 - Karma: 98
ya and that border thing is really annoying...
try a vignette, but definitely not on every single shot...
Jan 21 2010 9:31PM
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A.Eberhard
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Ya all black and white just wasn't doing it for me and a different song choice.
Jan 21 2010 9:37PM
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screamin_seamen
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Thanks for the tips but some of you seeing your videos have no room to critique yet....
Heres a mess around edit i just posted.Made this in about 5min and yes i know there is a border and i will leave it out in the next edit.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5JLsmOws-E
Jan 22 2010 10:45AM
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petesguitar1
Posts: 358 - Karma: 5
I thought it was pretty good. The skiing was cool..I personally don't like the track but that's just me. I agree that a couple of flashes of colour would be cool, but I do like the black and white.
Jan 22 2010 6:57PM
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iannelson
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I actually liked the song, i felt it went good with the video. I also liked the blackn'white. The border was kind of annoying, but thats been said befor.
Jan 22 2010 8:55PM
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squibble
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i thought the song was a bit slow/didnt fit the trickery. and some random colour would be nice
Jan 22 2010 9:05PM
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