Replying to NEWSCHOOLERS IS MY HOMEPAGE wallpaper

So i tried to make a wallpaper saying NEWSCHOOLERS IS MY HOMEPAGE.

I copied the idea from The Berrics and theirs looks like this


i didnt like how mine turned out, the text did not come out like i wanted it to.


so im basically asking if someone on here with more photoshop and brush skills than me can either edit mine or make another one.