how were you able to listen to a 5 min song in under a min? You don't even get a feel for it in that short of time.
The end of the song was sweet but i wasn't a fan of the beginning, it was too coarse and hard to start off with. Perhaps some sort of lead in to it? like a rise up similar to what you have in at 2:30 in the song. And it could have done with some light lyrics in it kinda like something from this song?