Replying to Edit Critique

I'm heading up skiing once more tomorrow and plan to do some more filming and then make another edit. I have not had the opportunity to shoot or edit anything other than some non-skiing things to this date. I was wondering what you think about this edit, what worked and what i should change for next time. Thanks for any and all comments. hate greatly appreciated

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