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This is a horrible research paper. It has ZERO VALUE as a ACADEMIC RESEARCH PAPER. Your introduction is actually not that bad. Your second paragraph should expand on your topic but has nothing to do with your topic, uses foul language, and just sucks.
Your main paragraph has zero academic value. And yes, the UC I went to had a film studies class on porn, but this has zero value for a research paper on obesity. What do overweight woman have to do with porn?
This paper has zero academic research. It is bigoted. It is racist. It is mental masterbation.
Spell check? Are you fucking serious (dang cussed. You know a baby gets cancer every time you say fuck, right?)? Like I am going to take the time to spell check. As long as it is coherent and has a point that is all I care about
Oh no!! I forgot a '.' in the last sentence! I am far from being the top of my class, but when I got my Masters I at least had a 3.8 gpa. The person who wrote the paper actually had a decent intro paragraph and is obivouly talented. But that class seemed like it was a community college class.