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Few New Pictures. Please Critique.

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SteezyOhio
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ive got a few new pictures, been shooting alot lately. doing work for my school independent study in photography. so ive got some pics imma post up from a facebook album cause im lazy and dont want to put them onto anywhere else lol, so give some tips and pointers.

Didnt mess around witht his picture yet, just converted to JPG
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i think i needed to get over these more, but theyre tall flowers considering im 6"3'
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needs color adjustment IMO, but looks better on parents lcd screen.
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Cuteness factor times 3!!!!
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kayak on sunset lake.
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definately working on this right now, slipping a film grain over it and going B & W. Studio Shoot
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^ little work on it i already had done
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more studio work, alot of teacher assistance in editting these.
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alright well thanks a bunch, im off to a concert right now, ill be back later. have a good night NS.


Oct 8 2009 6:55PM
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Desired_Name
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The first one is pretty sick, looks like it should be Jones soda label
Oct 8 2009 6:57PM
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SteezyOhio
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thanks, i went back and digitally took a picture of this _ spot that i had taken a picture of for film photography, really cool how the plates were used to cover a broken board hole.
 Definately could use some contrast.
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Oct 8 2009 10:30PM
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kepler.
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Media & Arts?
Oct 8 2009 10:31PM
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SteezyOhio
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FUCK! i just realized, no more making of threads after i smoke! im on it! iggyskier! go!
Oct 8 2009 10:32PM
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J-Wallz
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its good but alot of your pictures are cliche. the flowers and sunsets have been done so many times i dont like them unless u do it unique way. but thats my opinion. first pic is cool too.. its different
Oct 8 2009 10:48PM
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SteezyOhio
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yea, flowers is lame, but they had good color for being middle of october, and the sunset has a kayaker coming across it, which looks really cool with the rippling, ive got a better frame where he is more into it if you think that might look better?
Oct 9 2009 11:10AM
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1080ski
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^the kayaker is too far into the darkness for it to really even be noticable. and there is no sun in the sunset. you got the exposure down though
Oct 9 2009 11:14AM
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pduck
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i would have liked a little more depth in the lake shot, but overall great pictures man.
Oct 9 2009 12:29PM
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