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in my opinion after a quick glance at everything, you are still taking snapshots of what is happening, many of the pictures lack a strong compositional feel to me and the lighting is a bit off in some of them.
also you should focus on proper framing of each photo and your decision of using horizontal vs vertical format.
And vary your distance, it seems like every picture is shot from the same focl distance, if you are using a fixed lens, simply move closer to the subject.
that's my advice, take it at your own risk, I'm by no means a pro and could possibly be leading you in the wrong direction, the things about photography is that it's a subjective field and some people like certain things while others do not.