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Santa-Cruz
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ok so last night at like 3 i couldn't sleep so was taking pictures

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Sep 20 2009 11:38PM
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.jr
Posts: 5313 - Karma: 356
Fix your WB,
2 & 3rd did a little bit for me..only because I could relate to #2.
4 & 5 are super cliche.
Sep 20 2009 11:49PM
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Santa-Cruz
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yea i got a new camera and i was just messing around with the setting and how to work everything

Sep 20 2009 11:52PM
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GORlLLA
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I especially like the necklace.
Sep 21 2009 1:02AM
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Santa-Cruz
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another thing the regular wb was to warm (orangeish) and the one i used gave it a cooler feel and imo it looked better
Sep 21 2009 1:08AM
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davedinuzzo
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theres nothing exciting about them... just boring photos of boring things showcasing a little bit of depth of field
Sep 21 2009 8:23AM
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meggles
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I really like the third one but as for the rest of them..there's too much of the same..same colors, same techniques..and the goggle shot isn't clear..plus you're in the picture
Sep 21 2009 1:54PM
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Ham.and.Cheese
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for 2 and 4 try to maybe get the full object in focus and everything else blurred or whatever because it looked incomplete if im making any sense
Sep 21 2009 9:48PM
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Twaddler
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i like the simplicity and depth of field
Sep 21 2009 11:04PM
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Lanceasaurus
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very interesting work man i don't know what to say other than its so simple yet so stylish
Sep 21 2009 11:42PM
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narwhal
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haha funny joke
Sep 22 2009 12:21AM
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cobra_commander
Posts: 16909 - Karma: 4,686
I am glad you just got a new camera and were experimenting with taking photos.
Tonight you should it experiment with the delete button.
Sep 22 2009 2:27AM
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cultrara
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the third one is really good, I like all the blue-gray in it
Sep 22 2009 6:56AM
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.jr
Posts: 5313 - Karma: 356
kinda harsh..
Sep 22 2009 11:37AM
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skinnylove
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look at you. your an asshole. that's the second post i've seen of yours today that is total dick. let's see some of your work.
Sep 22 2009 12:58PM
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Santa-Cruz
Posts: 2236 - Karma: 11
hey you know what you should do



kill your self im pretty sure no one would care

and just go and die please no one wants to hear your voice ever
Sep 22 2009 6:09PM
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cobra_commander
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hahaha. you ask for a critique and then you get all pissy when someone does not lie through a smile. They suck, get over it. Try again, if those suck delete them, and try again. repeat above process until you get something you like. Look at all the photos you take and ask yourself what you could have done to make them better? Then go out and do that. Once you get a photo that you can not find any way to make it better post it up.

not much you can do about the google shot or the skullcandy one, those are just gonna suck on principle, photographs need a subject, and to work they need a subject that is interesting. There is nothing remotly interesting about your goggles or your skullcandy thing.
Sep 22 2009 6:30PM
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no_steeze
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none of those are really interesting, often times no matter how cool you make something in your room look, it won't be a great photo. you need to focus a little more on composition and have an interesting subject that goes past what's just depicted in the photo

1-3 your wb detracts a little, just set the camera to auto

4 was too short a shutter speed so you got camera shake

5 is the best executed but still not that interesting
Sep 22 2009 7:00PM
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