Replying to My first Edit, comments?

hey, i just made a BMX edit of a friend of mine. and this is my first time editing. i used Final cut pro.
any comments? what can i do diffrent and shit like that? i know some of the clips is a little too long and boring.

and the song is "Legend Recognize Legend" by "lazerbeak"

Lars Erik BMX edit from vebjørn on Vimeo.