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Critiques please

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KellyK
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So long story short me and some buddies have been putting on some shows on homemade ramps lately and this is one of our endevours.  We call ourselves Wi-Fly for Wisconsin Flyers

Let me know what you think!

+k for good responses.

Road Trip! from PEACE_media on Vimeo.


Aug 5 2009 1:08AM
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hiphopopotamus
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you guys are really good at skating and biking good edit too.
Aug 5 2009 1:28AM
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traylortrash
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word, that was sick. im not great at critiqueing (sp?), but for me all the filler got a bit boring... but i guess thats the point of the whole road trip thing eh? anyways riding was dope, and you guys have some sweet ramps n shit. nice
Aug 5 2009 1:29AM
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KellyK
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thanks dude.  and i know what you mean about the filler.  it's the first time i've done anything like a road trip edit and i think i put way too much in. 

if anyone has any tips or anything on this, let me know!

+k to you guys
Aug 5 2009 11:08AM
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sklermang
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yeah i dont think the filler itself was uninteresting, it was just too much at one time. maybe you could do it like traveling circus and just have the filler broken up by different shots or mini edits. that style seems to flow pretty well. sick time lapses btw
Aug 5 2009 11:15AM
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KellyK
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thanks man.  i think i need to plan out my filming better next time.  we all rode our park the night before and if i would have filmed that i think i could have thrown in a mini edit or two.  its tough to break it up though when you're trying to go in order, ya know? 

thanks for the solid response, i'd give you k, but you're already at 10
Aug 5 2009 11:32AM
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miroz
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My Threads for later.
Aug 5 2009 12:03PM
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camski26
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nice edit man. road trips are always fun.
Aug 5 2009 2:02PM
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