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Looking for honest feed back on a short film

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spruitm
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good?  bad?  did you understand it?  we left it pretty open.


Jul 10 2009 9:35AM
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goneforever
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Same over here. Good job!
Jul 10 2009 10:10AM
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Panchuk
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That was really good!

Just kinda botherd me how monotone the guy in the green was..
Jul 10 2009 10:19AM
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wellpreparedrare
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i enjoy how dumb people can be, take sum painkillers
Jul 10 2009 11:03AM
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scott23~
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silly pink names.
Jul 10 2009 11:23AM
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yojimbo
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it wasn't very good I'm sorry to say. keep trying. a good start i guess?
Jul 10 2009 2:41PM
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infedel_one
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haha yah i lilked it pretty goood...i also get whats happening...my only feedback is like the other dudes, try and get some emotion into the green guy....i mean yah he's prolly depressed in the situation but put some feeling and emotion in there and its set...keep it up
Jul 10 2009 3:37PM
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spruitm
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well, thats better than i was expecting.  it was for a summer class and we were all kind of sick of the class so we just threw it together.  we didnt feel like finding actors
Jul 12 2009 11:41PM
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