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NS T-shirt design critiques...

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Blandct
Posts: 1858 - Karma: 37
So i went ahead and tried a design out for the contest please check it out and give me some suggestions for improvement...

Jun 22 2009 1:37PM
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MatRich
Posts: 4789 - Karma: 1,813

put the newschoolers.com on the back for sure. I would also change the font on afterbang, I just dont like it ( my opinion though) other than that its a pretty sweet design

Jun 22 2009 2:55PM
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MAnderson
Posts: 181 - Karma: 11
i would take out the speech bubble and afterbang text otherwise its sick and id buy it
Jun 22 2009 4:15PM
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LC.
Posts: 5952 - Karma: 2,423
Make the whole logo smaller and take out the bubble.
Jun 23 2009 2:57PM
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Yeezus
Posts: 3350 - Karma: 469
too similar to whats been on the site before
Jun 23 2009 3:58PM
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Blandct
Posts: 1858 - Karma: 37
word thanks for the input entries are full so i can't submit a new version or anything
Jun 24 2009 3:49AM
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MAC.D
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Jun 24 2009 10:55AM
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Username_42069
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take out "newschoolers.com" all together, put the NS on the back just above the butt, and take out the Afterbang bubble. 
Jun 24 2009 10:56AM
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