Replying to Skiing inspired verse please dont hate

So I wrote a verse last night and want some opinions positive or negative I appreciate all but keep it constructive please. I tried to switch up the rhyme scheme to be more complicated but I dont like it as well as the plain AABBCC


 Flat down flat
Ill Lay you on the mat
Peep the meaness of my rail action
You'll think I'm rampage Jackson
Brutally slaying you as my competator
You ain't nothing but a bull
And I am your matador
But with the tricks I pull
You don't stand a chance
Watch this spin/
/Before you leave in a ambliance
7 9 no wait it's a ten
Double grab
You're a boy among men
Dont try to stab
Me in the back
I am a carnivore
leading this pack
Of sheep
Check my pretzel on this kink
Surley it will make you weep
My skills are envied like a coat of mink
Like its lining my flow is smooth as silk
Yours is chunky
Like some out of date milk
Peep my swager
  i keep it real funky
Your style is old like Mick jäger
Your plain like a monkey
But like the liager I'm one of a kind
Observe this misty bonk
I'll pause and let your mind
Catch up like hunts
While your freakin like Adrian monk
We be puffin mad blunts