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A Day In The Life - Paddling Short I Made (critique please)

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japollner
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Shot this over 3 days a week or so ago and edited it together.  Vimeo destroyed the quality of it.  I have no idea why it looks the way it does.  Anyway, enjoy, and any constructive thoughts on the editing would be appreciated.

A Day in The Life from Jack Pollner on Vimeo.


May 20 2009 11:30PM
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low_fidelity
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to be honest he music ruined it for me. it sounded like stereotypical cuntry white folk music
May 20 2009 11:54PM
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garygohard
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yeah the music really sucked
May 21 2009 12:04AM
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japollner
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First off...Old Crow Medicine Show does not suck...all they sing about is cocaine and booze. 

Secondly, I thought it fit.  Any other opinions?
May 21 2009 5:52PM
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thisandthatfilms
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well i dont do cocaine. so idk about you but i didnt think the music fit in any way shape or form
May 21 2009 5:56PM
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Dosh
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dude fuck off! so many of your types lately just killing the vibes on this site. no one wants your wholesome cereal box opinions---your shit is so stale
May 21 2009 9:21PM
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MAC.D
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everyone is entitled to their own opinion so stfu
May 21 2009 9:51PM
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polka.yardSAIL
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i don't quite understand it, but that was one of the greatest "fuck offs" i have ever seen! :D

anyways, directed at the video maker, the music is not "bad" because music is a completely subjective topic. but i would line shots up better with transitions in parts of the songs (to put it in simple terms) and i would use more editing techniques like flashes, fades, and the like.
May 21 2009 10:34PM
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