Replying to Critique my 30 second film please. for movie production class.

So we had to make an edit of anything we wanted that kind of 'built up' to a climax of some sort.

i chose to do my friend dunking. What did you like, what didn't you like, what can I work on etc.

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vimeo embed:

And he dunked it. from Max on Vimeo.

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https://newschoolers.com/web/content/viewvideo/id/267131/