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Song i wrote for my girlfriend (song link)

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C00N3Y
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So tell what you think

I sing the majoirty and than my friend patrick takes it at one point

he also produced the beat

Apr 12 2009 12:54PM
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amo
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what's up with the album art?
Apr 15 2009 10:25PM
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uni-corn
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And you mean little because you are asian, right?
Apr 15 2009 10:35PM
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C00N3Y
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the black guy on the song like 2 min in

its him....he did it
Apr 15 2009 10:36PM
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amo
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for the beat you posted, its just a few verses, and more of a rap, could maybe use a little work.

There is a time there is a place
For us to get together to commemorate
We walk these streets
We walk this town
There’s only one way to get down

I don’t see you givin your all
I get up again just to fall
I don’t know why I don’t know where
But we all know that the time is here

These people have come from all over the place
They stand in the crowd just to see his face
He looks back out, right into their eyes
He can’t understand, can’t sympathize

I don’t see you givin your all
I get up again just to fall
I don’t know why I don’t know where
But we all know that the time is here

Apr 15 2009 10:39PM
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[~_~]
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Blast! You've seen through my guise.
Apr 15 2009 10:42PM
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ElbridgeGerry
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Your lyrics give me a massive hard-on.
Apr 15 2009 10:44PM
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slevin_kelevra
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not really my type of music, but it was good.

The other guy coming in helped out and made it different, in a good way

you kind of sound like falloutboy
Apr 15 2009 10:53PM
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95959
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Dude, that was sooo good, seriously I really enjoyed it. Torontoson sirfryonator collabo anyone?
Apr 15 2009 11:30PM
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WytePwrRnger007
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Damn, that was pretty legit man keep it up and you have a future set out for you, damn.
Apr 15 2009 11:56PM
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Christian_Schum
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The beat is sick cause its like electronic but not at the same time, the voice is a little like cartel but i feel dashboard in there. I think its sick. I would prolly buy this if you had more
Apr 16 2009 12:22AM
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steezerampage
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whats your girlfriends name
Apr 16 2009 12:29AM
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0123456789
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not creepy at all...

also good song mang, not really my style, but sounded really good none the less.
Apr 16 2009 12:30AM
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steezerampage
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Just a first name would do, he was talking about lyrics and what not, her name would help, just first would do nicely.  Just a first name is not creepy
Apr 16 2009 2:04AM
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InkShrink
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You're going to earn some major brownie points with this.
Apr 16 2009 8:27AM
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spotter487
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wow, that is a shitload of money for a song.
but the end product was pretty dope so props.
Apr 16 2009 10:49AM
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InkShrink
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I keep listening to it to over and over too.

Love the beat.

Apr 16 2009 11:02AM
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MikeWalsh
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So good its going on my ipod so i can listen to it all the time... i wish i had your talent.
Apr 16 2009 12:35PM
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.travis.
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props for the talent and for the balls to post this up on NS. such a good song! what did she think about it?
Apr 16 2009 1:19PM
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TannerBalls
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It's good but the guy at the end kind of ruins it
Apr 16 2009 1:23PM
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Marissa.M
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Love it. Awesome job dude and you have a nice voice. Have you played it for her?
Apr 16 2009 4:16PM
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Sean...M
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wow that was actually dope.
Apr 16 2009 4:29PM
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Marissa.M
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I actually disagree. I think the whole thing is sick and I think your friend adds a nice touch to it. That's just my opinion though.
Apr 16 2009 4:32PM
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C00N3Y
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chicks name is nicole


add me on facebook if u want

Taylor Cooney

under lorne park secondary
Apr 16 2009 4:41PM
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InkShrink
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Your fb says you're single?
Apr 16 2009 5:23PM
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C00N3Y
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ugh i never change that
Apr 16 2009 5:24PM
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Runthered
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oh man thats some serious poon getter song
good job i enjoyed it
Apr 16 2009 6:03PM
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Remora
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Awwww :) Best boyfriend ever.

That's my favourite kind of present to get - something really personal or made just for me.
Apr 16 2009 6:29PM
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ParkE
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dude that was reak good. not gonna lie. kinda my style if it was more guitar
Apr 16 2009 6:40PM
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2+2=5
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you'll definately get brownie points from all the girls. but your voice is like an exact rendition of all the junky emo thats on the radio. and that beat was hot in 98' when the backstreet boys were around.

but i guess if the girls like it that's all that matters.
Apr 16 2009 7:05PM
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walker.
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i kept seeing this thread at the top and was always to lazy to look at it but now that i did im really impressed! i was expecting something really lame but its amazing! i hope your girlfriend appreciates this song! and its on my ipod hope thats ok
Apr 16 2009 7:14PM
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skier_07
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I really like this!
Apr 16 2009 7:14PM
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sick-as-aids
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that was pretty sick dude
Apr 16 2009 7:22PM
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amo
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More beats?
Apr 16 2009 8:02PM
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C00N3Y
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im making new beats soontimes
Apr 17 2009 9:36PM
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amo
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yesss
Apr 17 2009 9:44PM
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BootySpunk.
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Bump

Was listening to my iTunes and this song came on. It is sick as fuck and more people should hear it.
Apr 18 2009 12:52AM
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C00N3Y
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hump da bump
Apr 18 2009 10:14AM
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t_rob
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I WANT MORE OF YO BEATS SON
Apr 18 2009 12:25PM
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C00N3Y
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7 song album coming out at the end of june

will drop on NS
Apr 29 2009 10:33PM
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Marissa.M
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can't wait!
Apr 29 2009 10:36PM
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Talacious[Tally]
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thats hella good man!

Apr 29 2009 10:40PM
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C00N3Y
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hahaha

im single ;)
Apr 29 2009 10:41PM
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SeanTom
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Dude this is excellent. I got to say it reminds me of All Time Low, not so much the beat but the vocals.
Apr 29 2009 10:47PM
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k.perkins
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Allen! It's a good song.. and I put it on my ipod so now you have to listen to it all weekend. HA
Apr 29 2009 10:50PM
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KellyK
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ask her to prom ;)
Apr 29 2009 10:53PM
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8ONE657
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wait you're single? didn't you right this for your gf?
or did i just totally miss a joke...
Apr 29 2009 11:14PM
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C00N3Y
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i recently broke things off with her
we dated for 7 months
it just didnt feel right
she changed a lot in the past month
so got realy bitchy and thought she was king shit and after i tryed to talk to her so got pissed at me and dropped my guitar on the floor (it didnt break tho, solid spruce guitar)
Apr 30 2009 10:30PM
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Marissa.M
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that's no fun. i'm sorry. i would get so pissed if somebody dropped my guitar. i bet yours is really nice too. my ex boyfriend would beat on mine and i always wanted to punch him.
Apr 30 2009 10:34PM
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C00N3Y
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its a gibson dove
aka a $3600 guitar
aka i almosted chris browned her
Apr 30 2009 10:39PM
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