Im sorry, but seriously, how old ARE you?
I do not mean offense, but you cannot just come on ns with shit like this and expect everyone to hop on youor dick for karma. I cannot believe how degraded ns has become with all of this karma fuck shit. I haven't been really paying attention until this one, and now I realize how fucked all of this shit is. For instance, if these were to be sold as a pair of skis, who would BUY these? Like spend real, actual, money that you have to work for?! My brother is in 6th grade, he is 11 years old, I have entered contests before and he has drawn stuff along side of me. And I truly mean no harm, but this is just the truth. But my brother's skis that he has designed have been stronger than this entry.
Here is my criticism of your ski design:
First thing overall, your base and your topsheet are both white, and EXTREMELY unbalanced. It is just hard to look at, there is so much brightness and space. Now, your bases are aight, it is simple and basic but it works and maybe just needs different color? possibly, think about using more colors even. Alright, your topsheet needs a lot, but at least it is a start. The problem is there are no solid lines, it is all scribbly, looking like a kindergartener drew it or something. I can't really tell what's going on with the ipod (?) or why it's there, if this is the start of a concept you should have more music oriented objects on your design. Like musical notes, or the headphone wires could wrap around the words, but there needs to be more if you are going to be placing an object on the ski. AND finally...your colors suck balls, have you ever even taken an art class? Nothing works about the colors you have chosen for the words and then you even changed some of them on the headphones! I want a flow of even and balanced amounts of colors that compliment each other. You should start by looking at a color circle and checking what three or four colors work.
And one more thing, I listen to reggea and celebrate the life of Bob Marley everyday, but you ARE NOT rastafarian and rasta is used too much!! I love RASTA colors and even have a Lion of Judah bandana, but if you overuse a beautiful thing it becomes ugly.
