Critique my Music for +Karma

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Insane

Here's a project I just finished for an art class / personal music musings

Let me know what you think, all comments are appreciated

And this is all me, no loops

http://taylorbrody.tumblr.com/post/89094870/we-have-a-vision-taylor-brody

Mar 23 2009 2:22PM

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cocktapus

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Newb

thats pretty good man for not using loops. how long have you been making music?

Mar 23 2009 2:29PM

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Tbrody

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Insane

dabbled in synth stuff off and on for 3 or so years

Mar 23 2009 2:37PM

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hartig

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Crazy Fool

woah, 100 views and 2 replies?
good stuff by the way

Mar 23 2009 2:37PM

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Tbrody

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Insane

i know people don't want the karma haha

thanks

Mar 23 2009 3:18PM

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[Adam]

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Insane

the music blended well with the speech. well done sir

Mar 23 2009 3:29PM

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HWW

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It was pretty good. Easy to listen to.

Mar 23 2009 3:39PM

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mait

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Wannabe

Diggin the music, and the lyrics are a good backdrop

Mar 23 2009 10:23PM

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thomas_dube

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Loner

gahd that was trippy !

Mar 23 2009 10:46PM

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gnarnia.

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Insane

the flow of that worked really well

Mar 23 2009 10:51PM

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TPatel

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Loner

i liked it. it was really good, esp for not using any loops, and the "vocals" were blended really well.

nice job.

Mar 23 2009 10:53PM

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ho_chi_minh

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Pro

sounded pretty good expect for your bass drum(kick) beats. i felt like they through off the natural rhythm. like they didnt hit in the right spots.

Mar 25 2009 1:09AM

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sick-as-aids

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im playing it as i write, so i write exactly what comes to mind as it happens..

i like the start, works well, keeps me interested in the song, may drag on for a word or 2 to long, like the change of beat, then the increase of tempo, main beat needs to change, o it did, thats good, like the drop, with the voice coming back into play.,.. o its a shame it had to end...

overall i liked

Mar 25 2009 6:02AM

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JoeTheRipper

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Insane

Sick sample, where's it from? I don't know if you mean to kind of do it on the off beat, but if you did I think it's quite interesting. I was quite disappointed with the drop, nothing really happened. Use a different kick maybe? it's pretty good.

Mar 25 2009 7:22AM

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