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I'm not sure how much you guys were focusing on videography, but I'll give you some tips anyway. First, switch up the angles - it gets boring. Second, the song/editing definitely did not give me a feel good/fun time vibe. The song can't just mirror the mood - if you want to show a good time, have it be faster paced with jump cuts and funny clips rather than just a straight throw down edit.
Also, lose the fisheye - unless you're following (and even then vig looks bad) its worthless and distorts the picture and gets as annoying as the repetitive shots. However, a fisheye shot once in a while on a follow to change up the view makes it more interesting visually for the viewer.
Thats about it. Hopefully I didn't sound like I was trying to rip you a new one, because that's not what I wanted at all - just some advice to help you guys improve your edits.
Cheers!