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I have a dream edit

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PULSEofdaNATION
Posts: 426 - Karma: 51

This is my second edit. This was shot on Martin Luther King Jr. Day. Let me know what you think. Plus Karma for any good advice..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2KsBNr2d_HQ

Jan 21 2009 12:04AM
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wnab21
Posts: 1313 - Karma: 18
Try some 270's on and some grabs with spins. Also get a tripod for less shakiness
Jan 21 2009 12:08AM
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Jwalk
Posts: 4647 - Karma: 134
ya tripod would help other than that you looked like you were having fun which is what skiing is all about keep it up
Jan 21 2009 12:14AM
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Ski4frnt4445
Posts: 420 - Karma: 132
pretty sick man.. deffinatly agree with the reply befor.. also try and add alittle style to all the tricks. not that you dont have style.. just would be supper sick with more
Jan 21 2009 12:15AM
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Z_rob
Posts: 3076 - Karma: 152
JEA STEVENS!

i was there on MLK day also.

i already give your video props just for riding at stevens haha.

but ya try some grabs with those spins and try a few 270s.

but overall pretty good


oh yeah and better song next time. i know it fit the MLK mood, but just trying to give some advice.

Jan 21 2009 12:33AM
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dergblerp
Posts: 1303 - Karma: 77
My main complaint about this video aside from shakiness would be that you put sooo much footage at the beginning and end of the trick. It almost looks like you didn't edit the video. The tricks were dec, just keep on filming and you'll get better.
Jan 21 2009 3:06AM
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Fischer_Pro
Posts: 52 - Karma: 13
Dude that was a sick video. The kid doing the 5's and the huge threes was sick.  
Jan 21 2009 1:54PM
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MAC.D
Posts: 5654 - Karma: 344
get closer for some of the shots
Jan 21 2009 2:41PM
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panojibber
Posts: 3382 - Karma: 216
More pop less arms.

Good song choice, I wanted to use that song for an edit but I'm too lazy to film.
Jan 21 2009 10:37PM
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AlexGaynor
Posts: 947 - Karma: 148
 try and come off forward on the boxes and learn control. you need that to progress i think
Jan 24 2009 12:05AM
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unamused.
Posts: 341 - Karma: 10
i think that the edit would flow better with some different transitions between shots. the fade can get repetitive but thats just my opinion.
Jan 25 2009 12:10PM
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TZP
Posts: 874 - Karma: 61
you should shorten the edit by only keeping one or two of the same trick on the same feature, so it wouldnt look too repetitive. You can also work on having more control, cleaner landings, stuff like that
Jan 25 2009 5:49PM
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