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Nice job on the vid, especially for a first edit.
If I can, I'd like to pass along what I think will be a helpful tip. When you're shredding those lines, try to keep your focus looking down the fall line, rather than across the hill. Many times in the video, you were looking across the hill rather than downhill while turning, which is one of the reasons why your turns were a bit less smooth than desirable. When your shoulders are not square to the fall line (down hill), you must swing your upper body to turn, which wastes energy, hinders fluidity, and makes your skiing appear jerky.
Improving this technique will help you as you get into steeper and more technical terrain, so you can react more quickly and don't barndoor over or get stuck in turns.
Hope you don't take that as a negative comment, but rather, constructive criticism. Keep shredding.