Replying to First kinda legit edit

Hi,

me and my bro (s[k]iing27) are making a ski movie that will sum up our year in skiing

so far we have only had the chance to ski in Jackson Hole (which was great) but there is more to come

this is the opening segment

our next edit will be an east coast park edit

just wanted some feedback on the skiing and editing

i am using a canon hf10 with or without a semi fisheye lens

the movie will be called Kinetic

alright here is our Jackson edit