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Albrecht.
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i need to write a 5000 word paper to have my MIP deferred and im having a little trouble.  i have 2000 words but i think ive said all i can in the paper already.  i was hoping someone had an essay for school or my situation about this subject.
Nov 5 2008 8:14PM
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860
Posts: 2930 - Karma: 166
cant you just copy and paste a bunch of stuff off the internet?
Nov 5 2008 8:31PM
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comeatmebro
Posts: 10720 - Karma: 66
pm motumbo. he writes papers for kids all the time, i hear they're really good too.
Nov 5 2008 8:31PM
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eheath
Posts: 61603 - Karma: 123,084
5000 word wtf thats like fucking 20 pages.
Nov 5 2008 8:34PM
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infedel_one
Posts: 5140 - Karma: 444

sounds like you got royally fucked

Nov 5 2008 8:57PM
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*V-Love*
Posts: 500 - Karma: 19
we would need to know what you have already discussed so we could give you ideas in addition to those topics
Nov 5 2008 8:59PM
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Albrecht.
Posts: 1535 - Karma: 11
ive gone through its bad for you
my friends that dont drink are "winners"
another offense could screw me later in life
Nov 5 2008 9:05PM
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*V-Love*
Posts: 500 - Karma: 19

Maybe cover the people it hurts besides you... family, friends, strangers that you might hurt due to being under the influence

have you covered the aspects that it could make you angry and act out irresposibly and that kind of bs.

Nov 5 2008 9:50PM
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steezyjibber
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i bet you could get away with 4200 words
Nov 5 2008 9:53PM
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nickrdwd
Posts: 250 - Karma: 10
yeah find a story where someone screwed up big because of alcohol...car crash or something and be like this story has showed me that nothing good comes from underage drinking and its inspired me to stop. that could take a couple pages
Nov 5 2008 9:53PM
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Fish_Sandwich.
Posts: 9108 - Karma: 16
I know I'll get flamed for this but try getting high and writing it, you might come up with some creative ideas.  Read it again before you turn it in though just to be sure its legit.
Nov 5 2008 9:57PM
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notomatoplz
Posts: 1377 - Karma: 29
Tell them that you have learned alot from your mistake and vow never to ingest alchohol ever again, not even listerine or rum balls
Nov 5 2008 9:58PM
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4frnt_4_life
Posts: 183 - Karma: 10
at my school they run our essays through this software that checks what you have put done and sees what is copied and pasted
Nov 5 2008 9:59PM
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WORD.
Posts: 532 - Karma: 243
That sucks. you could always just read a bunch of it and "re-word" it
Nov 5 2008 10:01PM
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B.Aussie
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Add a case study and if you haven't already add statistics, quotes and the possitive side of drinking. 

Nov 5 2008 10:04PM
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860
Posts: 2930 - Karma: 166
ya mine too but you have to do it yourself, they cant scan it in and check it. But if that how it works at your school that blows. But throw in a bunch of statistics and how it ruins peoples lives and how illegal things are immoral and how it kills people and how much pain and suffering it cuased to everyone involved
Nov 5 2008 10:05PM
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MCIRONCOCK
Posts: 3094 - Karma: 30
Like others have said, find a story and talk about how it could have affected their life, and how it relates t yours, or how it could have been you. Usually when i'm out of ideas, i just kind of talk about all of the little unimportant things in really fine detail. It usually adds a few hundred words.
Nov 5 2008 11:32PM
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coolhandluke
Posts: 4465 - Karma: 153
sounds like you only need five pictures
Nov 5 2008 11:35PM
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Caveman.
Posts: 9067 - Karma: 330
Pic 1. Just think of a bad ass caption like if you get drunk and pass out people can forget about you and store their personal possessions on you.

Click for larger image

If a picture is worth 1000 words, I have just given you +/- 1020 words.
Nov 5 2008 11:45PM
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