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Compilation of some of my work.

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Schoellkopf
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I know there are a ton of critique threads out there, but I've been on a really great creative roll. So let me know what you think about all of this stuff. I appreciate all feedback as long as it constructive. Thanks for comments.

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Oct 27 2008 10:57PM
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k-rob
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i'm sorry to be so blunt, but the only one i like is the photo.
Oct 27 2008 11:08PM
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Malcolm
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oh shit im liking the drum one and the fist egg thingy
Oct 27 2008 11:08PM
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Schoellkopf
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That's cool, which photo?
Do you have any constructive criticism for me, for instance, what don't you like about the drawings? What could I do to improve my art? I appreciate all feedback as long it helps me in the future.

And sorry for a double post on one of the pictures.
Oct 27 2008 11:19PM
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Schoellkopf
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One more I forgot to add, my bad.

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Oct 27 2008 11:24PM
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CJHski
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i really like the ski movie music one
Oct 27 2008 11:41PM
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k-rob
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the photo with the trees.
i think you might need a background in your drawings, or better shading. they seem a little too abstract, and don't require much observation.
Oct 28 2008 12:02AM
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Schoellkopf
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Thank you tons. That is what I really need to hear. I'm a freshman in college going into digital media, and I need to know what I'm doing. I knew I could get some real help from some one. Here are two more with a little bit more going on. Thoughts? I definitely need more shading though...

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Oct 28 2008 1:18AM
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Fintendo
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Is that drummer Art Blakey?
Oct 28 2008 2:31AM
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sick-as-aids
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i like them alot man,. i especially like the ski movie music logo providing it was alll your own work!?
Oct 28 2008 2:49AM
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Schoellkopf
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^^ Nah man, Elvin Jones with a beard.

^ Thank you man. And yea, it's all original work, I started with a drawing and then scanned it onto the comp, from there illustrator made the magic.
Oct 28 2008 3:11AM
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Lakes
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Yeah buddy, looks good. My favorites are the SMM logo of course and the shirt. Definitely dig the shirt.
Oct 28 2008 1:27PM
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NJSabo~
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Damn man that stuff looks really good! Keep it up, youll only get better!
Oct 28 2008 5:23PM
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Schoellkopf
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I appreciate the love.

Bump for some more criticism.
Oct 29 2008 12:54AM
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Schoellkopf
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Sorry, I just want to bump this one more time.
I know critique threads don't usually last long in here.

Is there any more advice and/or comments?

Also, check out my photography in the link below.
Nov 1 2008 5:51PM
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JordanClarke
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nice drawings, those look supersick!! really creative, almost like Pollard :)
Nov 1 2008 7:33PM
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mBall
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the egg fist one is def really nice. I think all them are good. On the drum one the detail on the guy is great, but you may wana put a little more detail on the drums, i think that might help a little (like making them look rounded on the shells) idk just an idea
Nov 1 2008 8:19PM
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RICK_ROSS
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i  like it. it all relay creative
Nov 1 2008 9:56PM
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miroz
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I really like what I see here, man, because it reminds me of what I do.  I can't be sure, obviously, but is do you start doodling and turn random thoughts into something great?  I do that and its pretty neat to see the inner workings of my mind get put down on paper...and I think that's what you're trying to do.  I'm all for the abstract/designy stuff, because that's what's fun and interesting to draw.  That way it's always new.  The photo with the windmill and the later drawing with the water tower are my favorites.  For criticism, the drummer has great shading, but the drums themselves and the guy's face are kinda funky - you did a good job though, because that stuff is hard to draw.

Overall good stuff man, keep it up!

Nov 1 2008 11:52PM
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spliff.Life
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i liked the first one a lot,,,but the other ehhhh, they definately werent bad, i dont know anything about art, but they were just not my style, but the first on is really cool
Nov 2 2008 10:54AM
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Schoellkopf
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Here's a new picture I just did.
I wanted to bump this thread for some more comments too.
Sorry about the self promoting, but I've greatly appreciated all the feedback, and I'm planning on posting some new drawings that I did after taking into account what some people have said.


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Nov 30 2008 4:25PM
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k-rob
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that's hot. i like the tables and chairs. focus seems a bit off though, try messing around with that shot some more (if you can). i'd like to see some variations, i think it could definitely look better.
Nov 30 2008 5:02PM
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VT_scratch
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where is this taken?

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thats not lake superior in the background is it???
Nov 30 2008 5:18PM
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hamburger
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I dig! Keep doing what you do!
Respect.
Nov 30 2008 9:18PM
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Funnel
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I don't really know what I'm talking about but maybe in this and the windmill pic, the stuff below the sunset should be a silhouette instead of being able to tell what it is, just a shadow/silhouette type of thing.  Do you know?  Otherwise that's great, I suck at drawing so keep on kicking ass!  Good luck in school too, I hope this helped in some form.
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