When White People try to Rap!

sick but his voice is a little too white and nerdy to really pull off the wanna be black white rapper sound.....if that makes any sense

i dont know why people say uhhhh white people cant rap. they can rap just aswell as blacks, the blacks think they own that shit. but i dont like this song sorry. not my type

that kid got betta since i last saw the songs. skillz wit billz lol. the flows good lyrics are sick. the beats not really my style but whateva goes. seems a lil sage francis like almost. i bet once his voice gets more mature he'll dominate dis shit

Who said he wanted to be a black rapper???????

shits dopeee

good job matt.

Asher Roth
Atmosphere
Beastie Boys
old Eminem
Edan

^white rappers, but honestly, fuck that. Rap isn't black or white.

Thanks for the critique and love guys. Obviously thanks to pat for the thread.
couple words. don't take me wrong, I'm not trying to defend myself too much here just a little explanation that might help your critiques be more helpful.

I honestly am not trying to give off any hardcore or gangsta vibe or anything...I'm just trying to make some good, lyrical music.

I can't really do anything about my voice, I was sort of a late bloomer. Didn't even deepen until a year and a half ago; I'm working with what I have. Just working on really getting a decent tone down that doesn't sound straight up boring.

Drew: I'm trying man! I haven't been hitting the bottle or smoking cigs but I've been raising my voice so much more. I'm recording in my dorm room, so I don't really have any fear of waking the parents up seeing as how they're a ways away haha.
Thanks for the suggestions though, I know you've told me all that before. I can try just straight up yelling...but that's not really the vibe I'm trying to give. I'm planning on making a mini-album of 5 or 6 songs that I will re-record and put for download by early 2009. Hopefully I'll have shaped my voice and tone for the music by then. I'll have tons of time to record, anyways.

Once again, big ups! +k to peeps in the thread no matter what you say (for those who care). My goal is to make music that both you and I enjoy listening to, whether that means working for hours or just lazing back and letting it flow.

- Matt

shits getting doper, every song you make gets better and better, so i think eventually ur gonna break right on through and be mad ill, i mostly like classic rock so the stlye's not really me but i do like your lyrics

I have to admit i heard a song a little while ago that i wasnt a huge fan of but this track is tight....my brother and i rap sometimes, not seriously at all amd though its just a fun thing to do together so we jus record shit on his computer.

sounding good matt keep up the good work dawg

nope, not feeling it. and i'd tell you guys about ytcracker, but then you'd be all up on his dick and i wouldn't be the only kid who listens to him anymore and then i wouldn't be as cool as i am right now. oh, wait...

His written is good, but poor delivery he needs to practice and focus on his recording levels!

Check out another white boy...
 Myself

The Darchitect

www.myspace.com/thedarchitect

You guys need to check him out on thesixtyone.com

he;s got more songs on there....and might I just add, I miss the NS anthem on there