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Tanner-D
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Ok so i just started skiing park last season i onkly learned a little bit but i still decided to throw toghether a quick vid. Constructive critisim would be nice.karma plus for feedback
Sep 28 2008 2:32PM
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Tanner-D
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hahaha forgot the vid
    
Tanner REedit from Tanner Degi on Vimeo.
Sep 28 2008 2:32PM
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skiingonskis
Posts: 2076 - Karma: 262

little bit o fail?

Sep 28 2008 2:33PM
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Tanner-D
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i know that it is a fail but I just need advice
Sep 28 2008 2:34PM
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babujib
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the beguinning was okay, but the end was so sparatic i understand what you were trying to get at with it but it just doesnt flow well whatsoever also, hit some jumps and i dunno it wasnt very steezed out but it was sick otherwise, again this isnt ripping on you just constructive criticism and good luck working on it
Sep 28 2008 2:37PM
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Tanner-D
Posts: 2061 - Karma: 4,116
ok thanks for the advice
That was the first time I tryed anything like that at the end so I guess Ill have to work on that
Sep 28 2008 2:42PM
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Blurst
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yah you need some jumps in there
but good for first year
Sep 28 2008 2:43PM
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skiingonskis
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not bad, but theres more to skiing than rails..
Sep 28 2008 2:44PM
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Tanner-D
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my jumps suck right now
All I can do are safety 360s and crappy 540s but this season want to get some more grabs and spins

Sep 28 2008 2:45PM
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Download-My-Apps
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fuck man not bad for your firsty year skiing park.

Not a huge fan of the song and a little variety would be nice, maybe hit some tables.

keep it up
Sep 28 2008 2:47PM
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Tanner-D
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thanks
Sep 28 2008 2:52PM
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DavidStewart
Posts: 247 - Karma: 416
I'm sorry you have to ski at Heavenly. I do too
Sep 28 2008 2:58PM
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jasontheredhead
Posts: 955 - Karma: 243
dude your rail tricks are sick but just get some style in them
jumps?
Sep 28 2008 2:58PM
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HPskier
Posts: 1072 - Karma: 30
put about 2 more X's in your clothing and ur rails will look much better, lol
Sep 28 2008 3:01PM
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K.C.Deane
Posts: 1730 - Karma: 315
keep your arms down, cut your poles, and try and get in a more "athletic position" you know like bend your knees as bit ....not full on gorilla steeze but lower than you are.
Sep 28 2008 3:01PM
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JEWbacca
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you look a bit stiff on rail, just loosen up mang,
Sep 28 2008 3:02PM
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Tanner-D
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I just go this tshirt thats a xxxl its way to big
Sep 28 2008 3:13PM
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jdec45
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No a bad edit, and pretty good for only first year park.
Sep 28 2008 3:17PM
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N_well23
Posts: 279 - Karma: 36
Dang dude, looks good for first year skiing park. Try taking some of the stuff you did on those boxes and do it on rails. Also get some jumps in there of course... learn some inverts like a front or backflip, they are fairly easy(once you get the courage to try them) and they look sick. keep doin what youre doin and youre gonna get good
Sep 28 2008 3:22PM
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AhrenStein
Posts: 1941 - Karma: 177
really sick for your first year !

but remember, just because the song is girl talk (i think), does not make it good.
Sep 28 2008 3:28PM
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[978]
Posts: 424 - Karma: 1,491
in the beginning, i would cut off some stuff.  less of skiing up to the rail, and more of the rail itself.
Sep 28 2008 3:34PM
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A_Davis
Posts: 601 - Karma: 21
It wasnt bad considering it was your first year. I would say work on keeping your hands at your side on rails it looks way cleaner. Also start practicing lifting your front font up a bit so you can begin to pretzel. Other then that your doing great for your first year in rails.

Now as far as jumps go even if your not great i would definitely still be practicing. The more you do threes and 5s the better you'll get just keep working on the grabs. And also start hitting things switch. Also just start hitting all the jumps so you are confident.
Keep up the good work.
Sep 28 2008 3:42PM
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notomatoplz
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pretty good for a snowblader... get some longer skis
Sep 28 2008 4:21PM
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JDon
Posts: 282 - Karma: 15
Pretty good for first year. Like people have said above, a bit baggier clothes would help you look smoother and just work on your style as well as getting shorter poles. You might want to look into longer skis? They look really short?
Sep 28 2008 4:27PM
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jason...
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those skis looked a little bit to small for yah
Sep 28 2008 4:29PM
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mmallender.
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hahaha too big.... funny joke
Sep 28 2008 6:28PM
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m.brus
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i thought it was pretty good for a first year person. The only thing is loosen up when you do your rails. Maybe try some jumps.
Sep 28 2008 7:08PM
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SK1ERDUDE
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More jumps and work on your style. Your arms are kinda all over the place.
Sep 28 2008 7:13PM
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SHIFTYshifty
Posts: 577 - Karma: 11
your good on rails for your first season ever
oh and from above post
nothing is too big ...
Sep 28 2008 7:22PM
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wunderskier
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2 things:
Get some more steeze
What mountain is that ?

Sep 28 2008 7:24PM
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DaveM
Posts: 2936 - Karma: 1,558
thats actually really good skiing for your first year. good stuff
suggestions: i would suggest to bend your knees more on rails to get more balance and it makes your look like you have more control.
dont wind up so much when you spin onto boxes, its more about just following the spin with your shoulders first.
try to get some jumps in there

other then that i would say you did a good job. buy some sick outerwear.. like XL shit.. that would look sick
Sep 28 2008 8:07PM
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GuerillaInDaMist
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you r a good skier. get some center mounted skis and you will be set. the only reason the edit was medicore was becuase the filming was shitty. other than that respect
Sep 28 2008 8:10PM
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Tanner-D
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heavenly
Sep 28 2008 8:45PM
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H0NKY
Posts: 250 - Karma: 18
last year was my first year too..... try to get a little wider of a stance and smaller poles
Sep 28 2008 8:47PM
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mjmguy
Posts: 98 - Karma: 11
id say that was pretty good for ur first year but yea at the end it was really hectic
Sep 28 2008 8:57PM
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stormtrooper
Posts: 1191 - Karma: 461
ok tanner get ur tahoes mounted up and when u come out to utah this year ill coach in jumps and my specality super pipe!
Sep 28 2008 9:04PM
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Tanner-D
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i wsh i could go out to utah again this season but I think im doing south shor soldiers camp this spring break
Sep 29 2008 8:17PM
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Earl_Globz
Posts: 1553 - Karma: 808
getting shorter poles helps alot with staying low on rails, cuz u always need to get low to push. helped me alot
Sep 29 2008 8:23PM
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Skibumsmith
Posts: 5432 - Karma: 11,823
Better than me for one year of park skiing but you need more jumps. For editing rails, unless you really steeze them out, I think it's better to play them in normal speed and not slo-mo.
Sep 29 2008 8:30PM
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*monsterskier*
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that's rly good..work on the beginning (song) and the transition between songs a bit and it'd be good
Sep 29 2008 8:43PM
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